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Post by Shiningwater Sat Jan 04, 2014 10:04 pm

First topic message reminder :

So this is completely random. I had no prompt or anything, just wanted t write. So, I'll put each chapter in its own Spoiler, just so this post doesn't get massive. I'll edit this post every now and again, adding a new chapter of something like that. Feel free to comment or critic or whatever. Ya. Well, Here it goes.

Chapter 1-Chosen:

That's it for Chapter one. It's late where I am, so I'm gonna go to bed...zzzzzzz




Here's Chapter 2, hope you enjoy! I think I'm gonna try and put out one every day, but that's a goal, not a schedule.

Chapter 2-Meeting:

End Chapter. Hope you like it. This was a fun one to write. Tell me if I got your character wrong, just comment it and I'll fix it to fit your character. I did the best I could. Like I said, Hope you enjoy!




Sorry this is late guys. I had an adventure on the way here, which included-but was not limited to- tripping and almost breaking my drawing tablet, missing a flight, and coming in 6 hours later than I was supposed to. Bleh. Sorry, but here it is!

Chapter 3-Encounter:

Heh, that's where we're gonna stop. Gotta love dem cliffhangers. XD. Hope you enjoy. See you guys later!




Sorry guys, I've been sick and not in the mood to write lately. But, here's chapter 4.

Chapter 4-Awaken:

Bum dada ba! Not much action, but Xylyntian got his wish. Now everybody else who asked to be in it, don't bug me again. I told you I'd consider it, but I promised Xylnthian. Sorry to be harsh, but I'm still considering. Meh. It was still fun to write. We learn a bit about what happened to the dragons and who's behind it. Yea! See ya later!


Hey look! I revived it!  Impressed 

Chapter 5-Where...?:

Look! I brought it back! OMG
Anyway, Comments and Critiques are open! Hopefully I got the personalities right...it's been a while....


ANOTHER WILD CHAPTER HAS APPEARED! Yes, because School's winding down and I need something to do, I'm going to write more for this because I don't have it planned out and I want to see where it leads. :3

Chapter 6:

Darnit. Stinkin EarthWings. Why you gotta go and hide so well like that?
Anyway, this takes place before Korramyr was appointed King, just to clarify. 
Hope you enjoyed, and tell me if I got anything wrong with personalities and such. I want to make this as accurate as possible.


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Post by Shadowfire Tue Jan 07, 2014 2:30 pm

This is really great, I really like the storyline! Smile Even though I'm not picked.
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Post by Avian Tue Jan 07, 2014 4:55 pm

I'd love my Safari hat to have woodland camo Awesome Smiley
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Post by Shiningwater Thu Jan 09, 2014 6:17 pm

Chapter 3 is up.

Thanks for all the compliments, guys! You all rock!
Avian, you're request has been answered.
Xylnthian(spelling?) You are now in the first chapter a tad, and will make your full entrance next chapter.
Gemini, so did I get it right? Or should I change both chapters you are in?
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Post by Phantom Thu Jan 09, 2014 6:31 pm

Can Phantom join? She'll appear and then guide them along their journey or something


PLEASE?
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Post by Avian Thu Jan 09, 2014 6:37 pm

Avian isn't... well.... like that in Chapter 3, and he does value his life, so, a valid response would be:

"Gah!" Avian yelled, as he jumped back fear, barely avoiding a sharp end of a spike. "What was that!?" he yelled out in fear, with his lips still shaking.

Also, Avian wears sort of a leather suit, but its reinforced with metal plates and fabric as a cushion for user comfort.
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Post by OceanFlare Fri Jan 10, 2014 1:57 pm

Iiiiiiiiiiiiii wannnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaa beeeeeeeeee innnnnniiniininininininiiiinnnnn iiiitttititititititititititititittttiiiii
 Taco Nyan
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Post by Avian Fri Jan 10, 2014 3:11 pm

Your pointless spamming will not go unpunished... I killed it

Still waiting for the Armor Change, Shine.(Page 2)
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Post by Shiningwater Fri Jan 10, 2014 3:13 pm

OceanFlare: Maybe.
Phantom: Maybe.
I'm sorry guys, but not everyone can be in it! That would be a lot of dragons and a lot of characters to keep straight. Sorry to sound harsh, but it's the truth. But, I am not saying no.

Avian: We don't actually see Avian's reaction to the spikes, just when the others yell his name. Sorry if that was confusing, but it seemed clear to me. I can fix it if it was. So, did I still get his character right? Also, as God of the story, I say he is in Camo Safari gear. Deal with it. He is wearing Safai gear because that is what Avians in my story do, kapeesh?
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Post by Avian Fri Jan 10, 2014 3:24 pm

Kapeesh........

.....can I at least have a sword and a shield along with my backpack? Otherwise that wouldn't be Avian......
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Post by Shiningwater Fri Jan 10, 2014 3:32 pm

Fine. But, did I get the character right? We didn't see his reaction, just when the other yelled?
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Post by Avian Fri Jan 10, 2014 3:37 pm

He's be the ground, trying to catch his breath with his sword drawn. He won't get traumatized easily, only if he sees on of his closes friends killed, then he'll snap and become a killing machi- that was unnecessary.....

He would be on the ground, try to catch his breath as he nearly got injured by a metal spike... He's not totally dense, and he knows that he won't yell "It wasn't me!" if a spike came out and tried to kill him, then turn and try to blame a close comrade(Korramyr), instead, he would get up and tell every to back away from the source slowly and cautiously, then, when everyone's at a good distance, he'll slowly walk to the spike and try inspect it.

That's Avian, derp  Yep 
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Post by Shiningwater Thu Jan 16, 2014 6:07 pm

Chapter 4 is up.

Xylnthian: Your wish has been granted
Avian: Fixed the last chapter

Hope you guys like it! Any feedback is welcome!
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Post by Twilight Thu Jan 16, 2014 7:22 pm

FYI: Twilight isn't black. She's silver. But I guess in the dark she would appear black. Smile
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Post by Phantom Thu Jan 16, 2014 7:23 pm

I noticed that too and changed it for ya, Shine ^^
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Post by Shiningwater Thu Jan 16, 2014 7:26 pm

Oops, sorry Twilight.  Sweat I didn't check your character sheet and made the assumption that sense you were a Nightwing you were Black. Cuz I'm lazy. XD
And thank you, Phantom!

(Wow, that sounded a lot more racist than I meant for it to. I am really sorry and don't mean it.)
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Post by Luke Thu Jan 16, 2014 11:58 pm

*chuckles, oh yes i can certainly imagine their frustration at that! this certainly will be fun. *sits back to enjoy the rest of the story. sad im not writing much lately but in any case. great job with this one!
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Post by Shiningwater Wed May 07, 2014 4:50 pm

I BROUGHT IT BACK!  La La La La!
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Post by Shiningwater Thu May 22, 2014 9:01 pm

Sorry 'bout the double post. Sweat

OMG ANOTHER UPDATE! La La La La! Impressed
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Post by Phantom Thu May 22, 2014 10:11 pm

Xylnthian would like to add that he now has a metal arm ....


One of these days, he's going to become completely metal XD

And Gemini's a half-demon, just to let you know, and stuff.

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Post by Avian Sat May 24, 2014 3:13 pm

Come to think of this... Avian is multicolored unlike most dragons and has a unique combination of personalities... wouldn't make him sort of a freak? WUT
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Post by OceanFlare Sun May 25, 2014 7:36 pm

Im still waiting :3 and waiting..............................AND WAITING!?!?
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