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Post by Shiningwater Sat Jan 04, 2014 10:04 pm

So this is completely random. I had no prompt or anything, just wanted t write. So, I'll put each chapter in its own Spoiler, just so this post doesn't get massive. I'll edit this post every now and again, adding a new chapter of something like that. Feel free to comment or critic or whatever. Ya. Well, Here it goes.

Chapter 1-Chosen:

That's it for Chapter one. It's late where I am, so I'm gonna go to bed...zzzzzzz




Here's Chapter 2, hope you enjoy! I think I'm gonna try and put out one every day, but that's a goal, not a schedule.

Chapter 2-Meeting:

End Chapter. Hope you like it. This was a fun one to write. Tell me if I got your character wrong, just comment it and I'll fix it to fit your character. I did the best I could. Like I said, Hope you enjoy!




Sorry this is late guys. I had an adventure on the way here, which included-but was not limited to- tripping and almost breaking my drawing tablet, missing a flight, and coming in 6 hours later than I was supposed to. Bleh. Sorry, but here it is!

Chapter 3-Encounter:

Heh, that's where we're gonna stop. Gotta love dem cliffhangers. XD. Hope you enjoy. See you guys later!




Sorry guys, I've been sick and not in the mood to write lately. But, here's chapter 4.

Chapter 4-Awaken:

Bum dada ba! Not much action, but Xylyntian got his wish. Now everybody else who asked to be in it, don't bug me again. I told you I'd consider it, but I promised Xylnthian. Sorry to be harsh, but I'm still considering. Meh. It was still fun to write. We learn a bit about what happened to the dragons and who's behind it. Yea! See ya later!


Hey look! I revived it!  Impressed 

Chapter 5-Where...?:

Look! I brought it back! OMG
Anyway, Comments and Critiques are open! Hopefully I got the personalities right...it's been a while....


ANOTHER WILD CHAPTER HAS APPEARED! Yes, because School's winding down and I need something to do, I'm going to write more for this because I don't have it planned out and I want to see where it leads. :3

Chapter 6:

Darnit. Stinkin EarthWings. Why you gotta go and hide so well like that?
Anyway, this takes place before Korramyr was appointed King, just to clarify. 
Hope you enjoyed, and tell me if I got anything wrong with personalities and such. I want to make this as accurate as possible.


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Post by Luke Sat Jan 04, 2014 10:28 pm

Humm... Hard to be critical in my case also being a writer myself. A very interesting chapter however and its hard to find anything I can see wrong with it. Smile nice work and as a fellow writer I add.

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((Feel free to use it if you wish to Razz ))
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Post by Shiningwater Sun Jan 05, 2014 8:38 am

Thanks! Good to know that I can count on another writer to say when It's good or bad. XD

And thanks for the..um...Quote? I guess you could call it that. Yea. I'll try and fit it in somehow. I'll let you know when!
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Post by Korramyr Sun Jan 05, 2014 10:05 am

Nice to see Korramyr and Shine getting some play-time in for once, even if I wasn't directly involved in it. Razz
It looks interesting, I'd like to see more of it to be honest.
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Post by Avian Sun Jan 05, 2014 1:25 pm

Can I fill in for the EarthWings? Enz is pretty skilled from what I know, and I'll need some stuff. Anyway, Avian probably will ask "Who's doing this for the other tribes?" and upon hearing the EarthWing inactivity, he'll actually fill in for them solo and request that Enz is accompanied by Xylanthian or Coaxoch.

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Post by Shiningwater Sun Jan 05, 2014 4:07 pm

....Avian....what are you talking about? You confuse my brains!  Shocked 
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Post by Avian Sun Jan 05, 2014 5:04 pm

I want to investigate in the place of the EarthWings, lets Coaxoch take my place with Enz, 2 of them are best friends.
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Post by Xylnthian Sun Jan 05, 2014 5:54 pm

AWWW. I wanna be part of it D:
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Post by Shiningwater Sun Jan 05, 2014 5:55 pm

No. As God of the Story, I say no. You will go with the others, and we will all investigate the Earthwing Palace and Humans together. (Talking to Avian)
And, Xylntian, I considered it, you were my first choice, actually, but I couldn't accurately represent your dragons personality.

(lol. Totally just stretched my god powers to their limit. XD)


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Post by Avian Sun Jan 05, 2014 5:55 pm

Oh well, do as the Princess of Dea- am... fishes and life commands!
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Post by Korramyr Sun Jan 05, 2014 6:00 pm

Korramyr slowly becomes enthralled by Shine's storytelling potential, his body slowly melting away, the liquid Korramyr crawling to Shine's book as though he were a slug. "Bluhb... gliubhh...~ Boooooook!"

No. I don't know why I did that.
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Post by Avian Sun Jan 05, 2014 6:33 pm

Avian suddenly shuts the book and threw it into a fireplace within 3 seconds. Lucky, there were copies.

Sorry, reflexes. No hard feeling, Korramyr.
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Post by Korramyr Sun Jan 05, 2014 6:59 pm

Korramyr bubbles and sizzles as he is thrown into a fire with the book, becoming a gaseous Korramyr and flying around. "Wheeee!"

Still, I don't even know why.
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Post by Shiningwater Sun Jan 05, 2014 7:29 pm

Chapter 2 is up. Enjoy!

And also, Korramyr. What....just....what?
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Post by Xylnthian Sun Jan 05, 2014 7:32 pm

*SOBS*

I STILL WANNA JOIN! D:

Xylnthian's overconfident, with a rebellious, and cocky attitude. He's all, Chillax, man! or Whatever, man. I can do this. Easy peasy. What could go wrong?
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Post by Shiningwater Sun Jan 05, 2014 7:37 pm

Hmm.... Now that you give me that....hmmmm.....

Also, you might not WANT to join.  I killed it 

You can follow the others? Without permission?  Awesome Smiley 
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Post by Xylnthian Sun Jan 05, 2014 7:49 pm

Awesome Very Happy You should do this:

Xylnthian's trailing behind them right? With no permission (he's always been disobediant, so it's normal). And he's thinking, They'll never here me, and then he steps on a twig, and the dragons spot him, and he's all Uh oh ...


Very Happy

I like making Xylnthian get into trouble.
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Post by Shiningwater Sun Jan 05, 2014 7:53 pm

Cool. I think I will, everyone loves a trouble maker.
But, still. Are you SURE you want to? I mean, the norm of me is making the main characters (I.E., the dragons.) to get in a boatload of trouble/a lot of pain. I killed it
Heh. It makes a good story.
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Post by Xylnthian Sun Jan 05, 2014 8:06 pm

YES. MAKE XYLNTHIAN GET IN LOTS OF TROUBLE Very Happy

And I mean trouble by getting attacked alot
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Post by Luke Sun Jan 05, 2014 8:51 pm

Haha! Oh god I loved the last paragraph, it made me crack up so bad. Razz nice work again. Ps, might help but I'm not sure. I generally try to space out my chapters to about 800 to a thousand words but that's just me trying to get as much done as I can, also do not rush good art because it is art in its own way, if something doesn't fit into the story then you don't always have to add it in. Smile keep going though! It's awesome! And I hope you planed it... I know that sounds silly but I've written two short stories hoping to eventually be put out in a book and I've stalled at the third book chapter 3 right now...and I gave a rough outline in my head of what was to happen. Just like major events
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Post by Avian Mon Jan 06, 2014 6:34 am

Actually, Avian is a hyper-active dragon, he's more of a stubborn character who takes precaution seriously, and risk his life. Also, he's sort of clumsy, I'd say he'll check everyone only once. Instead of checking stuff while waiting, he'd just be like: "*Yawns* Where is he.... it's already been a few hours!" and just trying to sleep while sitting with his head support by his arm.
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Post by Shiningwater Mon Jan 06, 2014 3:25 pm

Fixed it, Avian.
Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep that in mind for the future.
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Post by Twilight Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:03 pm

Twilight is really nice and hardly ever gets mad, so if they were late she'd just say something like,"Oh, at least they showed up in the first place, right?" She's kind of like Sunny from Wings of Fire.
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Post by Shiningwater Mon Jan 06, 2014 7:03 pm

Ok, Twilight, Fixed it.
Thanks for the reference, I read that book, so this'll be a piece of cake!
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Post by Gemini Mon Jan 06, 2014 7:34 pm

Gemini's all, It's party time! or Booya! And can also change to, Mess with my friends, I mess with yo FACE!


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