Tormaigh the Thunderbird

It's Wake here with an Alt character.
Type of Character: (Lesser Species)
Personal Info
Species: Thunderbird
Name: Tormaigh
Alias: N/A
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight  
Personality: Tormaigh is an adventures Thunderbird who is both noble and chivalrous. Unlike many of his kind, the large bird has a respect for dragon, particularly Earthwings, mostly stemming from them allowing his family to live within their territory without bothering them. While Tormaigh will aggressively defend his territory from others, he tends to go for stunning his opponents as opposed to killing them. While Tormaigh is cunning, he is also somewhat easy to trick, but if the Thunderbird finds out he's been duped all bets are off. He also hates the cold.
Fears: While Tormaigh doesn't fear much, he has a fear of Ice Phoenixs and Icewings.
Strengths: Tormaigh has great eyesight, and can see creatures up to 3 miles away, and is able to ID them from 2 miles away.
Weaknesses: Cold weather can ice up Tormaigh's feathers, making it impossible for him to fly. The same thing can happen if he's drenched with water.

General Appearance
Height: 40 Foot
Feathers: Peregrine Falcon coloration
Eyes: Blue
Appearance: Peregrine Falcon

Skills and Abilities
Special Abilities: Tormaigh is capable of preforming a high speed dive that can reach 110 mph, though he rarely dives at top speed unless he's hunting or out to kill. The Thunderbird can also release half his charge in one attack that can effect an area up to 60 feet around him, which he calls a Burst Attack. This attack is enough to faze larger dragons (70-100 ft), stun mid-sized dragons (70-40 ft) and can kill smaller one (40 ft or less). This attack, however, come at the cost of weakening the Thunderbird for 3 hours (The time it takes to recharge his reserves) and makes him vulnerable. Tormaigh is also able to quickly recharge by flying into storms, or letting a Skywing hit him with an electric attack. This, however, can't strengthen him after his Burst Attack.
Combat Style: Tormaigh tends to stick to the skies and attack from above. He will also take advantage of any storm nearby.

Background
History: Tormaigh has lived in the Earthwing's territory for as long as he can remember, and his father told him to show them some respect, but to keep his own head held high in the process. While the Thunderbird didn't have much happen in his life, he has kept track of what goes on and now has his own territory.

After the monsters showed up, Tormaigh quickly became an scout for the Earthwings. He has also budded heads with the Nightwing leader, Tenebris.
RP Sample: Check out Wake's sheet.

I think this should be approved *waits for other staff opinions*

Strengths and Weakness is reserved for traits about your characters personality not your abilities place those under the skills and abilities area. Also lets change this "and kill smaller one (40 ft or less)" to this 'and can kill smaller ones (40 ft or less)' otherwise it sounds that without a doubt they will die instantly.

Edits finished.

.........."Strengths: Tormaigh has great eyesight, and can see creatures up to 3 miles away, and is able to ID them from 2 miles away.
Weaknesses: Cold weather can ice up Tormaigh's feathers, making it impossible for him to fly. The same thing can happen if he's drenched with water."
Still isn't personality traits but whatever.
APPROVED

Out for edits

Done. Changed age and added history.

Re-approved