Ashlyn, The Marked Child

^^^Ashlyn^^^
Personal Info
Name: Ashlyn
Alias: Common nickname: Ash
Age: 15 years old; younger than all her siblings except Au. Born in the first day of Winter.
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Personality:
When she was 1:

Ashlyn is cute and friendly but she also has an extremely mischievous nature. Wherever she goes, intentional or not, she tends to cause trouble..which may be irritating to those around her. However, after she causes the trouble, she often pretends it's not her fault (by looking cute and innocent) and run away.

She is extremely hyper and her energy (and sometimes happiness) seems to never run out. The sight of her sitting still on the ground is rare, because she's very restless and will grow bored after sitting down for only a few seconds. Then she will run outside to have fun or to satisfy her curiousity.

She also loves to hide from her guardians, seeking their exasperation, which she finds amusing. She is hard to find because her scales can change colour, since she's going to be a LightWing. The best solution is to go on with your normal routine or whatever and pay no heed to the absence of Ashlyn until she comes back, whining hungrily.

Since she can't talk yet, she communicates with her body language. Which is often not understandable all the time; tugging at someone's tail doesn't mean that particular dragon will understand that she's hungry. She may not be able to speak but she can understand the words others use, unless it's too complicated.

Anyway...if she doesn't get her way, she will sulk. And make that whining sound and irritate the other dragon until she gets her way. If not, she'll hold a grudge... Yeah, her small, kiddy brain can hold grudges (ha-ha .-.) and she doesn't really forgive easily.. Which means that she is petty as well.

She also gets distracted easily; it is almost impossible for her to focus her attention on something for more than 10 minutes.

Now, when she's 15:

Ashlyn is now rather shy, and quiet. She doesn't exactly shy away from others, but she prefers to listen rather than talk. Those who approaches her find a kind and gentle nature, always willing to listen to one's troubles. She is still very inquisitive, often seen exploring, but only to find species of wildlife. She still has a rather cute-looking face, and she's easy to bully as she has no confidence and doesn't know how to stand up for herself. Other than that, she has one of the same traits as last time: easily distracted, but not really restless anymore. She tends to be over nervous sometimes, though, especially during special events. She is also rather indecisive and inconsistent; she can't make good decisions, as she is far too hesitant, and as for inconsistency, she works on something only for a short period of time before giving up.

Interests:

-Hiding from others

-Finding out new species of wildlife

-Sleeping in weird places like somewhere in a tree

-Really nice dragons

-Beautiful art

-Diamonds

-Watching the sun rise/set

-Food

-Having fun

-Exploring

Dislikes:

-Hot places (30°C is enough to make her squirm)

-Mean dragons

-Being ignored

-Getting yelled at

-Being ordered around

-Bossy dragons

Fears:

-Death by burning, so she tends to avoid fires, even small ones

-Pain

-(She tries to hide it) The dark

-Being told that no one loves her

-Disappointing someone she loves

-Losing someone who is close to her

General Appearance
Height: 20 feet
Length: 45 feet
Wingspan: 60 feet
Scales: Tiny overlapping circles.
Eyes: Bright golden which lighten slightly at the edges
Appearance: Her head narrows at the snout. She has bright golden eyes which lighten to silver at the edges, and they are ringed with black. At the back of her head, there are three sets of horns which curve upwards ever so slightly; they are decorated with lines. Her ear is a tiny hole which is almost invisible; it is located in one of the petal-shaped skin covering almost half of the second and third pair of horns. Her whole body is usually white save for her horns, paws and the tip of her tail, which are golden in colour. At the tip of her tail, there are two spikes.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: EarthWings
Inheritance: Purebreed LightWing
Rank: Training to be a Scholar
Family:

Biological family: Threw her out of the home.

Adopted Family: Rii Rii (Mother)
AuSurath (Younger Brother)
Prasi (Older Sister)
Khusavir (Older Brother)
And whatever children Rii has adopted xD
Mate: When she's older, maybe.
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths:

-Since she is small-sized, she is fast and nimble, and sometimes it is hard to catch her.

-Another advantage of being small: she can hide in small places.

-She can run fast; the max speed she can go is 70MPH, but she will be tired out afterwards.

-She can sneak around unnoticed, because of her colour-changing scales.

-She also has a rather delicate-looking body, so she can hide big secrets without anyone suspecting her.

-She has a gentle personality, which attracts hatchlings to her. She can maybe boss them around <3

-She has a good way with animals. Her calm demeanor allows her to approach animals without scaring them.

Special Abilities:

-She is able to form large golden orbs of light between the spikes on her tail; she can use it to illuminate places, or throw it at someone. Once the orb leaves her tail, it will no longer be yellow in colour, but a blinding white - those around her will be blinded for ten seconds. The light occurs in a circle, which has a circumference of 100 feet. The light doesn't affect her.

-She can also breathe out light. It has the same effects as the golden orbs of light between the spikes on her tail. If she wishes to, she can change the shape of her light and direct it at something; instead of just blinding everybody, she can make her light form into a shape of (e.g) a mini tornado (broad at one part, thin at the other part) and direct it at a particular target. The others won't be affected.

-She can form golden orbs of light on her wings as well. She will curl her wings inward, and then a golden orb will form. It takes 10 seconds to do so. Then, she will move her wings in a flapping motion and then the orb will be thrown from her wings. However, this one can also act as illumination: it will float in front of her face, an inch or two away, and she can move it aside. However, if others touches the orb, it will not move. The orb, if she uses it to attack, will have the same...effects as the above abilities.

Note that her light is like smoke. The moment there's wind, her light will be blown away, depending on the strength of the wind.

Weaknesses:

-Easily lured away/tricked.

-Too naïve.

-Horrible at decision making.

-Has no confidence, can't stand up for self.

-Too gentle.

-Fragile teeth. If her teeth meet a great impact it will break.

-Still fifteen. Her strength cannot match older dragons.

-Scales not fully hardened yet. It's still (kind of) soft at her chest.

Combat Style:

She tries to negotiate with the other party, wishing to avoid bloodshed, but if it's really necessary, she will fight. She moves fast and strikes fast, trying to aim for weak spots like the belly.

Background:
History: This is very short: She got thrown out of the home because she had this weird mark on her, her parents thought that she was cursed.
RP Sample: Arty here. Arty nu want to put a RP sample.

APPROVED 1/2

So...the biggest thing I see that is need of change.....is thst she is a 36ft tall 3 year old hatchling. That is way too tall for a hatchling, especially for a three year old.

For her special abilities, is the first ability just a light that illuminates places?
And for the second one, what is the marble sized light do? Does it hurt anyone, or just makes light?


Bump when ready!

I edited her height~ Sorry about the unreal height, I didn't know how tall a hatchling should be. My estimation is crappy xD I edited her special abilities too..

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Special Abilities:

-That pathetic orb of light between that two spikes on her tail. It illuminates places, and its brightness and area that it lights up is equivalent to that of a torchlight.

-That tiny marble-sized light that she can breathe lights up her surroundings too, but it is very dim compared to the light on her tail; it's meant for warming her slightly, not illuminating places.

-Note that she can control her special abilities at will, but when she's distracted, the light between her tail spikes may appear and disappear at random intervals.

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So, bump!

All looks good...but the height XD

So, a 26 foot tall dragon is roughly a two story building. My hatchling, Au, is one foot tall and only one year old. Other hatchlings, depending on the tribe, range from 1-5 feet. As you are three, I think it would be best to figure out how tall you want your dragon to be, then adjust your height for a three year old, assuming you reach max height at an age of around 18-20.

I'm so sorry about the mistake >.< I thought the heights listed in Site Rules were for every single rank in a tribe, but they were actually for grown-ups. Not hatchlings.

I suppose she can be 3 feet..

So.

BUMP!!!!!!!

~2/2 Approved~

Out for edits~

I edited a lot of things. I put in a darker side of her, I changed her age, her tribe (she lives with Rii so she's an EW now, I guess), her height, her special abilities...WHATEVER. It needs to be re-looked at o.o

Bump

YES, ANOTHER EARTHWING!!! *Goes to get Anila so she can approve*

Hello, just a few things for you to fix

Just for clarification's sake, when you say this, do you mean that she is a pure EarthWing? If so, pwease put it in ;-;

Inheritance: Purebreed

With Nerissa, you say that;

-Good aim. She has a really accurate aim; what she throws will usually hit its target.

I've mentioned this before, but don't say that she usually will hit a target in your app It's implying that you can almost always hit your target without them having much of a say in the matter. However, instead, maybe put in something like 'she has a greater than average accuracy when she tries to hit something'. Or something like that - it doesn't have to be exactly what I say.

Other things to consider are these;

-Since she is small-sized, she is fast and nimble, and sometimes it is hard to catch her.

-Another advantage of being small: she can hide in small places.

I don't understand how a 120 feet dragon could be considered small... Maybe just rethink these strengths and modify them accordingly.

Also, I don't understand why your dragon has two personalities, traits, etc, are they bi-polar or something similar? I couldn't find it in your app if they were D:

Please, bump when edited ^^

Bump. Deleted off her second personality, specified inheritance, changed her height, deleted off good aim, added in a new special ability. And a new way to get past her light??

*I wish you were on cbox right now to make this easier*

With your light created mini-tornadoes, does this mean they have properties which are similar to them, as in you can create actual wind using whirlwinds? Or is it just the image they make?

-Scales not fully hardened yet. It's still (kind of) soft at her chest.

-Still fifteen. Her strength cannot match older dragons.

-Still fifteen. Her strength cannot match older dragons.

-Scales not fully hardened yet. It's still (kind of) soft at her chest.

You said something twice Please take out the copy! XD

Bump when edited~

Bump! Edited the weaknesses.

As for the tornados...no, they do not have the properties of one. They just look like one, and i put tornados because I didn't know how else to describe them xD

Bump, added in max speed she can run at, and a few strengths.

Khusavir (Older Sister)

BROTHER

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Bump when fixed <3

*bumps, nudges and baps Aero*

Re-approved