Kroshaj

by **Kroshaj** Wed May 25, 2016 4:18 pm

Personal Info
Name: Kroshaj (CROW-sage)
Alias: Devourer of Knowledge, Bookwyrm
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: Kroshaj is not usually one to make friends. He prefers to spends his time with learning than actually talking to other dragons. Born to be a hot head, Kroshaj often scolds anyone, no matter the rank or age, who interrupts his research.When on a good day where he isn't busy, he spends time with others and makes polite conversations and play educational games with the hatchlings. There are rarer days when Kroshaj falls into a sort of gloom where he sits and mopes for a few days.
Interests: He enjoys reading, experimenting, solitude, and playing tricks on the hatchlings as a sort of calming game for both parties
Dislikes: being interrupted, having to join gatherings that don't matter, having his things taken by trainees as a prank
Fears: Drowning is a major fear. he'll stay away from large bodies of water at all times. but he'll drink at smaller ones or someone bring water to him

General Appearance
Height:40 ft
Scales:black
Eyes:purple
Appearance: Kroshaj is a decent size of forty feet, with purple eyes and a maw that radiates with a dense purple shade. With a a set of horns that taper and curl and the end and a wingspan of sixty feet he treads the world with paws that each have four flat footed claws. Kroshaj's scale pattern looks like rounded arrow tips, or more like the classic knight shield, and as black as night with a purple iridescent shade. His tail is spaded instead of an dagger tipped shape.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Nightwings
Inheritance: Nightwing descent
Rank: Scholar
Family:N/A
Mate:N/A
Hatchlings:N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Deciphering arcane secrets and archaic battles
Special Abilities: Blending in with the dark is a casual thing due to the hue of his scales, but breathing a heavy smoke to cloak him and his kind takes time. it'll take a post to do it but it'll only last about five before disappearing. The smoke tends to blot out light during the day but you might as well have stepped into a void at night. Strong gusts of wind have been known to erase the smoke He's well versed at keeping up elemental shields and his offensive "magic missiles" though his shields can only take up three attacks before shattering and each missile takes about a three post recharge. A final ability is a trick often used in battle where he will create a swarm of 13 will o'wisps to distract enemies in sight. On normal occasions this takes a post to use and about three posts to recharge but a good perception will reveal these to not be actual entities.
Weaknesses: close combat is a major weakness. He would never match against a full blown and muscular dragon since he lacks the required build for it. It be like a flying ant trying to take down a hornet. He tries to stay away from hand to hand(Claw to claw?) combat as much as possible. Using too much of his magic, a sole combat method, exhausts him much more than most fighters. HE tries to use the most advance of magic to take others out quickly even though he has been told to conserve his energy. He's almost always asleep in the middle of battle or lying on the ground trying to replenish precious energy that he has wasted
Combat Style: far ranged and mainly uses his magic to change the battle in his favor such as optical tricks and archaic attacks

Background
History: Kroshaj was a gifted scholar from when he was a hatchling. He learned quick and it helped since he didn't have the right build for any offensive kinds of ranks. Kroshaj was often picked on for this fact and grew a fierce temper from it. Any compliment now sounded like sarcasm to him due to his mistreatment. During the years he concentrated heavily on his studies and became skilled in arcane readings and attacks. To balance his small build he likes to say all of it went to his brain.
RP Sample: Kroshaj was studying from many books and scrolls, trying to see some clear clarifications as to why the offensive magic missile spell only blows up whenever he uses it. He was aggravated until he looked at a newer entry that he overlooked. As he studied this new found knowledge he was called over by a few hatchlings to go find a will o'wisp with them. Kroshaj politely declined much to their disappointment but brightened up as he then said "I will happily join you on your search tomorrow. I promise it, now run along"

by **Aero Dynamic** Wed May 25, 2016 4:39 pm

Hello there, I'll be the first reviewer on your app.

Inheritence
Forgot to fill that out. Are you a full Nightwing? Half Nightwing half Seawing? That's where you put it.

Special Abilities
' Blending in with the dark and breathing a heavy smoke to cloak him and his kind'

How long can he do these things? Can someone blow away the smoke? Does it work in the light? Please explain them more and add weaknesses to them.

Combat Style
' far ranged and mainly uses his magic to change the battle in his favor such as optical tricks and archaic attacks
'

Any magic needs to be explained in special abilities.

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Bump when ready

by **Kroshaj** Wed May 25, 2016 5:52 pm

Hey, thanks for reviewing my App.

by **Aero Dynamic** Wed May 25, 2016 10:06 pm

Looking good, one last thing though.

For the 'will o'wisps' how many can he make and for how long?

After that, it should be all good Razz

by **Kroshaj** Thu May 26, 2016 3:44 am

I've finished, can't wait to start role playing

by **Aero Dynamic** Thu May 26, 2016 5:59 am

1/2 Approved

by **Kroshaj** Thu May 26, 2016 6:00 am

Oh wait that's right. two mods or approvers need to approve the app. Okay

by **Ignatius Sikum** Thu May 26, 2016 6:02 am

Hey! Just want one thing to be clarified a little before I give it the heads up.

Kroshaj wrote:close combat due to his profession

I would like you to edit your app and just explain how this is a weakness. Is it because he doesn't have strong muscles to fight off others? Or is it another reason? Expand on why this is a weakness.

Bump when edited.

by **Kroshaj** Thu May 26, 2016 6:09 am

I fixed the form again, hopefully this does the trick

by **Ignatius Sikum** Thu May 26, 2016 6:13 am

Considering the strengths of your special/unique abilities, I would also like you to add one more weakness. This is because you can essentially 'disappear' for 5 posts while striking randomly with your magic abilities. Currently, with him only being weak to physical combat, it's an incredibly strong dragon. The addition of a second weakness will help stabilize the power level and abilities of this character.

Bump one last time when you're done.

by **Kroshaj** Thu May 26, 2016 6:27 am

by **Ignatius Sikum** Thu May 26, 2016 6:31 am

2/2 Approved!!

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