Paradox, Son of Shade and Soul

Personal Info
Name: Paradox
Alias: None
Age: Newborn at the moment
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Bisexual
Personality: Paradox is very Energetic and loves to Play. Every so often, he'll run up to someone he knows and start biting their leg playfully, he often gets bored and hates it, so he does this often and he always ends up falling asleep at the end. Though at times, Paradox can be Shy when seeing dragons that neither his mother or Father have met and will often try to avoid them. When he is away from his parents for too long of a time, he'll start to get very paranoid and think that he is lost. Also, Paradox can be very serious at times, whenever his parents tell him something important, he listens carefully and whenever he is told to do something by his parents, he'll do it almost immediately. Paradox isn't much of a fighter and prefers to stay behind someone he knows for protection and wait until it is over.
Intrests:
- Having Fun
- Being with his friends or Family
- Seawings
- Stars
- Climbing
Dislikes:
- Bullies
- Getting Lost
- Being Bored
- The Sun
- Being in fights
Fears: Paradox has a fear of getting lost and having to never see his friends or Family ever again. As well as a fear of Spiders

General Appearance
Height: 6 feet, 71 as an adult
Scales: Black Midnight scales with a silver underbelly and wings
Eyes: Bright Blue
Appearance: Paradox has Pitch black scales that blend into the dark, making it hard to see him in the dark, but his silver wings and Underbelly can definitely be seen. His claws have small small, sharp notches in them, which help him climb and his claws are silver as well. Also his tail fins are curved like a crescent moon.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: None, he is a rogue
Inheritance: 1/4 Earthwing, 1/4 Firewing and 1/2 Nightwing
Rank: None
Family
Father: ShadedDeath or Shade
Mother: Fallen Soul or Soul
Sisters: Quicksilver and Karitoriki
Mate: None, he's a hatchling
Hatchlings: None

Skills and Abilities:
Strengths: Paradox is agile, going up to 5 - 10 MPH as a hatchling. He isnt that strong for his age and usually sticks with his family as protection. He can be smart at times and is very loyal to his parents' rules. The notches in his claws, help him easily grip onto trees
Special Abilities: Paradox can breathe fire, due to his Firewing inheritance, but it is nowhere near as strong as a pure Firewings Fire, which is a about 80 Degrees Celcius He can shoot a dark ball at an opponent which distorts their vision temporarily, making the opponents' sight very blurry making it very difficult to see. however, this only lasts for a minute and takes 15 minutes to recharge. The Dark Balls are not that large and are about 2 feet large, smaller then him.
Weaknesses: Paradox cannot handle too much pressure and often panics if he is put to a task that can change a lot of he doesn't do it correctly. Paradox isn't that strong as well and often relies on his speed if he is attacked when alone. His dark ball takes too long to recharge, giving the enemy a perfect amount of time to attack. He can only breathe fire twice per hour
Combat Style: None

Background
History: None at the moment
Rp Sample: it's me.. Draken

How does he distort their eyesight, and how distorted is it?

Fixed

Few things to fix and add.

Paradox wrote:Paradox can breathe fire, due to his Firewing inheritance, but it is nowhere near as strong as a pure Firewings Fire.

I want to know temperatures they can reach, especially considering he is a hatchling it shouldn't be a very high temperature.

Paradox wrote:His eyes can change to red and if he stares his opement in their eyes when his eyes are red, their eyes will get distorted temporarily, making the opponents' sight very blurry making it very difficult to see.

I'm going to decline this area. This is basically copying someone else's UNIQUE ability and they are a DEMI. You need to change the colour which his eyes can be. And this is also too strong, if you are just staring into their eyes and they aren't maintaining eye contact, you can still make their vision murky and unstable. Restrict this ability further.
I also want you to reduce the time which he can maintain this ability. He is a hatchling. Not an adult.

Paradox wrote:His eye distortation ability takes 12 minutes to recharge.

I want you to further clarify how this is a weakness, because I just see this as an ability restriction or limitation for it. Add to this further if you want it to be a weakness.

Bump when edited~

Fixed, hope I did better, I'm still sick

One last thing.

Specify how large the orbs are currently. Considering he is small, I would imagine that they wouldn't be rather big at the moment.

Add one more weakness, because, again, he's a hatchling, weak, and has rather strong abilities for someone of their age.

Bump when done.

Anyways fized

Approved!

UNAPPROVED.

I misread the fire to be 100 degrees, not 10. That temperature is too low, so I will need you to increase it a bit, so that its AT THE VERY LEAST higher than body temperature. I won't accept anything lower than 70 degrees.

Bump when edited.

-_- fixed

Sowwie XD approved