Stalker: The Phoenix of Pyyria

by **Stalker** Sat Sep 20, 2014 5:47 am

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Personal Info
Name: Stalker
Alias: ???
Age: 14 years
Gender: Male-Dragon
Personality: Brave, and wild. He doesnt now the word 'calm', he's loyal and a little bit
cheeky. As a young one he is busy and curious, and he know many about the nature.
Interests: Hunting, searching for a new domain, making speed and fire.
Dislikes: A Dragon who fears everything, a dragon who lives on rules, frogs and water.
Fears: His death, lost his friends, drowing.

General Appearance
Height: 12 ft
Scales: Dark red with a brown glow, sometimes a little bit orange.
Eyes: Gold like the sun, with a star-like glow in them.
Appearance: A dark red dragon with a brown, sometimes orange glow to his scales. He has golden eyes like the sun that glitter like the stars. He has wraps on his paws, and a rope with a jewel on his neck. He has no weapons, as he is a weapon himself.

Tribe Info and Status
Tribe: He is his own leader
Rank: His own leader
Family: He won't talk about this, remember?
Mate: Hahaha! Thats a funny joke!
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: His speedy, agile and silent. His not very strong.
Special Abilities: The power of fire and air.
Weaknesses: Water and brute dragons.
Combat Style: He fights like a ninja, quick and stealthy, fading away into the backgrounds.

Background
History: He lost his family before he was born. He was raised by a fox in the woods. Now he's a traveler, exploring the vast lands of Pyyria and other continents.
RP Sample: Like a dragon.

by **Atlantis** Sat Sep 20, 2014 6:47 am

Can you make it more detailed? It's too much generic. Try to be more descriptive, especially on personality, appearance, skills and abilities.

Is he a rogue, right?

Also, 1,70 ground to shoulder, do you mean 170 centimeters?

by **Stalker** Sat Sep 20, 2014 7:36 am

Atlantis wrote:Can you make it more detailed? It's too much generic. Try to be more descriptive, especially on personality, appearance, skills and abilities.

Is he a rogue, right?

Also, 1,70 ground to shoulder, do you mean 170 centimeters?

I going to edit this, but 1 thing: i'm dutch and i hoping i can post.