Here is my bio.I wish to join the Icewings. Name:Frost

Personal Info
Name:Frost
Age:3
Gender: Male
Personality: He is confused and scared of other icewings. He doesn't understand why their are ranks and why he should care. He is kind and senative. He is very understanding but has a bad temper at times. He is a bit childish,but can b smart if wanted be.
Interests: He likes playing in the snow and playing with his mother and father.Pork.
Dislikes: All Icewings but the nice ones.Fruit and Veggies.He hates warm places.
Fears: He fears of one day being alone. The dark. Water.
General Appearance
Height: 3'4
Scales: Icy blue with a tint of white stripes across his back and chest.
Eyes: Dark blue.
Appearance: Small and thin.
Tribe Information
Tribe:Icewings
Rank: Hatxhlings.
Family: Aries(Father) and Wolf(Mother)
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings:N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: His family for he will do anything to preotect them.
Special Abilities:Ice Breath.Melting point:100 degrees F since he is a hatching it will be quite weak. His range 20 feet.
Weaknesses: His size and age.He is too trustworthy of other dragons.His family even though he will do anything to protect him it makes him rash and hot tempered.
Combat Style: He uses his claws and ice breath.

Background
History:Was born into the Icewings but is a huge disappointment as he is at the bottom of the Ranks.
RP Sample: I roleplay with a normal story outline such as: Frost walks into the winter forest bleeding and dizzy."Why did they attack me? What did I do to deserve this?" He falls to the ground and passes out in the cold unforgiving snow.

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You should add more to this. You can be more descriptive in his appearance, strengths/weaknesses. You also need to add more to his personality.

Look Dude, I have a job and I worked really hard on this bio. I barley have time to edit it. So for now please accept it as it is. I change it later when I have time off. But Please let me Roleplay with the way it is.I mean no disrespect to your rules. Like i said when i have time I change it.

I understand, but it needs more. Just add to it when you can.

THanks for understanding and so I can roleplay now?

(Opps my friend stayed logged on)

I understand that you are busy but could you add another line of personality? Also, how are his family a strength? You also need to explain your ice breath a bit more, like with how far it can go and how long it can freeze things, melting point, ect. You should also expand more on appearance. And one last thing, Ares isn't around so he wouldn't be playing with his father much.

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Bump when ready

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You could use a little more detail in your appearance as Aero said. Other than that, it looks okay.

To avoid cluttering the section I'm moving this to the graveyard (since you have made a new sheet)