My Dragon (revised)

Personal Info
Name: Jonin
Alias:
Age: 200 human years (20 dragon years)
Gender: Male
Personality: Jonin tends to mind his own work and proves himself by making the best armor he can, he doesn't like being interrupted and gets annoyed easily, he is a quiet person. when not making armor he likes to take mud baths and read books about metallurgy. he also likes to experiment with metals and always goes into a frenzy when near food.
Interests: Likes to make armor,likes to run,likes to read, likes food.
Dislike: Being bothered, water, slacking on the job, betrayal.
Fears: Fears he might drown in the ocean.

General Appearance
Height: 68 ft tall
Scales: Dark red scales
Eyes: Yellow
Appearance: Has a scar over his left eye and plates on his underbelly , he has strong metal-like plates that go over spine to his tail and stone like plates on his legs.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Firewing
Rank: Vulcan
Family:N/A
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Breathing fire and defense
Special Abilities: Molding (strong) shaping armor, Frost-fire(strong) can breathe a flame that doesn't harm the body but cools down metal quickly.
Weaknesses:  Water
Combat Style: Long range attacks by shooting Fireballs.

Background
History:N/A

Hey there

I see that you have started another topic that's fine, would you like the other one to be deleted? Also could you add 2 more sentences onto the personality and if you could add a small RP sample at the end. Like 2-3 sentences of RP, this could be anything.

Thanks
Ark

This is being moved to Old Applications, thank you. Please send a PM to me if you wish this to be undone.

Taking out of old apps. I think you put the wrong one in Cossy that and 2 weeks time is how long you should wait to put away such things.

Personal Info
Name: Jonin
Alias:
Age: 200 human years (20 dragon years)
Gender: Male
Personality: Jonin tends to mind his own work and proves himself by making the best armor he can, he doesn't like being interrupted and gets annoyed easily, he is a quiet person. when not making armor he likes to take mud baths and read books about metallurgy. he also likes to experiment with metals and always goes into a frenzy when near food. He has a hidden power that no one has heard of but only him. He likes to play with his adopted hatchling named Razorwing.
Interests: Likes to make armor,likes to run,likes to read, likes food.
Dislike: Being bothered, water, slacking on the job, betrayal.
Fears: Fears he might drown in the ocean.

General Appearance
Height: 68 ft tall
Scales: Dark red scales
Eyes: Yellow
Appearance: Has a scar over his left eye and plates on his underbelly , he has strong metal-like plates that go over spine to his tail and stone like plates on his legs.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Firewing
Rank: Vulcan
Family:N/A
Mate: BlueClaw
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Breathing fire and defense
Special Abilities: Molding (strong) shaping armor, Frost-fire(strong) can breathe a flame that doesn't harm the body but cools down metal quickly.
Weaknesses:  Water
Combat Style: Long range attacks by shooting Fireballs.

Background
History: Adopted near the volcanoes jonin was a young apprentice until is mentor died of a sickness when he was the age of 12 dragon years. he taught himself to make armor and what types of metals there are.
RP sample: Jonin carefully pads toward the mines careful not to wake up his foster mother. He has heard stories of a metal orb that has immense power but no one has been able to get it because of the lake and small space inside. He knew he was small enough and wanted to please his king and know he wasn't worthless.

That seems good to me, but before approving edit your first post instead of putting another one.
Also, maybe just detail a bit more on the appearance (basically writing everything you omitted because it's in the picture ^^)

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