Zyra the Kind

Zyra the kind

6 years

Female

Bisexual

Zyra is a kind, brave and smart dragon. She can be thoughtful of others, and will sometimes bring back gifts like flowers and shiny things to trusted ones. Although she will speak up if there is bullying and is not afraid to fight others of her age. She will respect older dragons though. She also likes the moonlight.

Fears: Zyra doesn't have many fears, but there is one for certain. She fears that everyone might leave her and never come back.

Zyra's strengths are:  quick thinking and keen sense of direction with emotion.

weaknesses: being too kind and her shyness.

Height: 4 ft. at the moment, 35 ft. when fully grown.

Her scale color is close to amethyst, but slightly darker. The design of them is pointed at the end, facing her tail.

Her eyes are a light violet, but not too light.
Her wings are leaf-like and match the colors of her scales. Her tail has fur at the end of it.
Weapons: As of being a Hatchling, she has no weapons of her own.

Tribe: Nightwings

30% Earthwing and 70% Nightwing

Age: Hatchling

Family: She has never known her family. Her parents died protecting them from humans.

Mate: N/A

Hatchlings: N/A

Normal Abilities: can manipulate the shadows, like blending in the shadows, for a few seconds at the moment, though she is only able to do that as of now. She is still learning what she can and can't do. When she is older she will be able to blend in the shadows for a longer amount of time. Approximately, 1 minute to 3 minutes.

Special abilities: N/A

Combat style: N/A

History: Zyra doesn't have a lot of history. Her parents died protecting her from humans. She only knows this because of a friend of her parents that helped them fight, although she doesn't remember the name because of a head injury. She lives with her parents friend and has been for the past few years since she was hatched.

Hello! It is a pleasure to meet you. I am Lori Iolar, one of the character moderators. I am happy to grade your application today!

-First, to prevent confusion I will ask you to label the information you listed as shown in the original template.
-Zyra will need more weaknesses to balance out her three strengths. Please elaborate how kindness can be a strength as well as a weakness. Can you tell us in the application how bravery is a strength as well? From how I see it, two of your strengths seem more like personality traits than advantages.
-Please elaborate on how your character can manipulate shadows. What can the shadows do? How long can she do this? Keep in mind that since your character is a hatchling, the ability cannot be as powerful as an adult's.
-Please elaborate on your special ability as well. You cannot send your opponents straight to sleep, but you can make them fatigued (although probably not much as you are a hatchling). How long can she do this? How many times can she do this every few posts? What is the effected radius?

Thank you for taking the time to read this and I hope we get to speak again soon!

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Welcome back to the site! I'm happy to see someone return after all this time!

There's a couple things still that need to be addressed. Firstly, there are no "leafwings", I think you meant EarthWing. Second, what percentage is she of NightWing and EarthWing? For example, is she 50/50? Or maybe it's 40% EarthWing and 60% NightWing? This is important to know not only for the sake of detail, but to help yourself and staff determine how weak or strong your abilities will be later once you've aged your character.

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Nice. If you want, she can be taller than 35ft when fully grown since she has EarthWing heritage. And speaking of, will she have EarthWing abilities at all, or do you intend for her to only have NightWing abilities? I ask because being part EarthWing, she would have some resistance to poisons and toxins. You can add those now or just wait til later when you're ready to age her, totally up to you.

I'll add them later when she ages

Alrighty. Then this app is approved. You may now start rping! Would you like your username changed to your character's name? This is not mandatory but it is recommended as it makes certain things easier. Also, do you have discord? We have an on site chat I'm sure you've noticed, but we mostly only use discord now as it is more convenient for our busier members. I'll be in the chatbox and I'll give you a link to our server if you do. Most of our active members are adults but the same rules apply there as on site.

I do have discord and sure. I don't mind at all

Alrighty then just jump on in to the chatbox!