Sorai the IceWing Tracker

Name: Sorai

Alias: Does not currently have one

Age: 20 in human years

Personality: On the outside, Sorai had a rather sarcastic attitude, constantly mocking others for there mistakes. She is generally cool and collected, however, can easily be angered. She does not like to talk, and would rather settle a dispute with a fight than a  friendly chat with the other dragon. She is rather blunt with her opinions, most of which are rude and demeaning. However, her true personality sometimes shines through. An overprotective and loyal dragon, she can be rather shy around others. However, she usually masks her unease and anxiety around others with her previously mentioned attitude. She will not trust others easily, believing most to be extremely cruel. She has almost forgotten this attitude at times, but quickly remembers it eventually. However, she has a slightly insane personality at times, enjoying the feeling of other creatures blood on her scales, and loving the taste of it as well. However, she also is slightly lonely, due to her always driving away potential mates and friends. She is also extremely prideful, believing herself to be the best at everything.

Likes: She loves peace and quiet, and prefers to be alone than around others. She enjoys hunting, due to it being a way to channel her anger into the killing of the creatures. Plus, her and her tribe get a meal out of said creatures. She also loves exploration, and discovering places new to her. This is because she can find a place for peace and quiet that no one may know about. She enjoys the sight of others pain, making up her slightly insane personality. She enjoys the feeling of blood on her scales and claws, as well as the taste, so she will often kill for sport rather than prey when she has free time. She also enjoys fighting other dragons.

Dislikes: She despises loud and crowded areas, preferring to avoid them at all costs. She hates being trapped in one place for a long time, as she loves the feeling of wind on her scales, the icy ground underneath her feet.

Height: Currently 40 feet tall


Scales: Her scales are a bluish white with a blotches of blue scales randomly dotting her neck, wings, and tail.

Eyes:  Her eyes are a sapphire blue, and appear to be glowing in dark areas.

Appearance: She has large spikes, looking almost clear like stalactites, sticking out of the back of her head. Her eyes are a sapphire blue, and appear to be glowing in dark areas. She has large, serrated claws, perfect for gripping onto icicles, which she perches on at times. She has a whip-like tail, with sharp spikes on the tip of it.

Tribe: Icewing

Rank: Tracker

Family: None as of now

Mate: None

Hatchlings: None

Inheritance: Pure IceWing

Strengths: Sorai is smarter than the average dragon, able to analyze her surroundings and use them for her own benefit. For example, say a fight was taking place in a cave with stalactites and stalagmites. She would be able to use this to her advantage, using her serrated claws to grip onto stalactites, dodging attacks effectively. She will also hide behind the stalagmites, also dodging attacks. Sorai is small. She is faster than an average IceWing, both in flight and on land do to her small size for an IceWing. She is also better than dodging than most. However, due to her prideful attitude, she will often talk, and get distracted, in a fight, rendering her vulnerable. She is slightly weaker than the average IceWing, preferring to fight from distances with her abilities rather than use her claws in a fight.

Abilities: Sorai can create mini icy tornadoes, by flying quickly in circles, and is able to grow them bigger. The max size they can be currently, however, is about 4 feet high, and not that wide. When she is unable to grow the tornado anymore, or unable to fly, she will use her wings to send the tornado towards her foe. However, without her help, the tornado can only sustain itself for about a minute or two before disappearing into an icy powder. She is able to use this without ice as well, however the same rules still apply. However, it can maintain itself for 4 minutes, but is weaker than the ice tornado. She can also create a thick fog to temporarily get away, by using the warmth of her body combined with the cold of her ice breath, to create a thick fog. She only uses this when she is heavily injured, and it will only sustain itself for a minute, and can only reach about a 6 foot radius. She can also become lost in her own fog. She is able to camouflage among snow and ice, as well as icicles, fairly well. However, the blue spots on her neck can give her away if she is not careful. Her icy breath is about -30 degrees celsius. She can also use her whip-like tail as....well, a whip. No real surprise there. Its fairly easy to dodge so.

Weaknesses: Sorai is overly prideful. She will often mock others in the middle of battle, call herself the most powerful IceWing, and many other things. She can become EXTREMELY annoying due to this, and can anger others easily. She is weak against rogues. One of her old friends, whom she slaughtered in cold blood one day to an assault on her, was a rogue after Sorai cheated on the trackers test, and stole the wooly mammoth said friend had caught. Enraged, the friend swore vengeance and left, never returning to the tribe, becoming a rouge. All rouges remind her of this friend, and she will always hesitate to attack them, which could cause her demise if not careful. She is terrified of anything to due with fire, and will often go out of her way to avoid anything that can shoot fire. This is because she was attacked as a hatchling, having wandered out of the nest, by a FireWing. Her parents came to rescue in time, but she was forever scarred by the sight of flames.

Combat Style: She prefers to quickly analyze her surroundings, before going on the offensive against the opponent.

History: Sorai has always had the same personality, thinking she was the best at everything she did. She was an amazing tracker and hunter, quick and nimble, and loved competitions against others. However, when the Tracker Test came about, she had been doing fine until she came upon the task of finding a woolly mammoth. These were rare, and she could not find one. She searched fruitlessly. Eventually giving up, she started the long journey back home. However, on the way there, she encountered her childhood friend, whom's name has been long forgotten. She was currently asleep, and had caught a woolly mammoth, which was nearby. Sorai, unable to handle the fact that her friend had been better than her, had stolen the mammoth and returned home with it. Her friend had returned home empty handed, however. She felt remorse, but did not show it. However, her friend now had a deep hatred, and swore vengeance before wandering off to become a rouge. A few years later, Sorai was attacked by the same dragon, who then tried to kill her. Sorai defeated her, suffering scratches and gashes all over her body. She slaughtered her friend with no remorse, and returned home. This is how she came to her current personality, and will never forget that day. However, she always morphs the woolly mammoth story for fear her rank will be taken if it was proven she had cheated on the test.

RP Sample: Somewhere in the IceWing territory, a large bundles of eggs lay. They were all close to hatching. Most were a bluish white color. One in particular, however, was a bluish white with blue specks randomly dancing over the surface. The mother and sire dragon laid nearby, watching there eggs with joyous expressions. The one with the bluish specks suddenly made a cracking sound. It was shaking, as if some creature inside was struggling to get free. More cracking sounds came from the egg, large webs appearing throughout it. Suddenly, the top of the egg finally fell off, revealing a small dragon hatchling. Her eyes were a bright blue color, glimmering like sapphires. The small dragon, a female, struggled to get out of the egg, before it finally tipped over, letting the yolk covered dragon spread its wings, fanning them out. The parents had already decided a name for her. Her name shall be Sorai. The she dragon stared at them, before waddling off. It had no idea of the future ahead, nor of the fate that lie before it. It was a small, oblivious hatchling. However....all good things must come to and end.

Age

'20 in human years'

We don't use dragon years anymore, and if she was 20 human years she'd be really young, too young to be a full tracker.

Missing Gender

Missing Sexuality

Missing Fears

Inheritance and Mate are in the wrong place

Strengths

How fast can she go?

Special Abilities, not Abilities

Special Abilities

'The max size they can be currently, however, is about 4 feet high, and not that wide.'

How wide are they?

You also mention she can create tornados without ice, but is that just over non-icy ground or without her breath? For the icy one, you never mention her breath, so I can't tell the difference between them.

And, another thing, what do these do? Can it push over a SkyWing but not an EarthWing, or does it do more?

How often can she use her breath?

Weaknesses

'She is weak against rogues.'

If she is weak against rogues, is she weak against everything? Rogues aren't they're own species, they are just other species that aren't part of a tribe. Therefore, she would be weak to everything.

Also, you might want to copy the whole template so that it's easier for us and other members looking at your app, and so that you're not missing anything. The app template is here, and you just copy it out of the box - http://www.rpgdragons.org/t100-create-your-dragon-template

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