Sagitarius Half wolf Half dragon (waiting for a approval)

Personal Info
Name: Sagitarius
Alias:
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Personality:Sagitarius is a shy and kind hearted wolf-dragon he gets embarased really easily and its hard to make friends for him because he is to shy to talk to them.Sagitarius tries not to make enemies he tries to be friendly but he fights when needed. He also loves to talk with his family listen to stories that his parents tell him. He is very loyal and would never betray his family or friends. He also loves to hunt the most his shyness dissapears when he's hunting he hunts without hesitation and most of the time gets into bad situations when he's hunting.
Interests: Sagitarius likes to Draw and write in his diary. He loves to pick herbs and grow them.
Dislikes: Sagitarius doesnt like to fight with dragons or those dragons that make fun of other dragons. Doesnt like flying.
Fears: He fears deep waters because when he was 5 he almost drowned in a deep lake so from that day on when he was near a deep lake, river or a ocean he starts to freak out he starts to sweat and shake.

General Appearance
Height: 14ft
Scales: Violet pink blue and cyan fur.
Eyes: Cyan
Appearance: Sagitarius is a half wolf half dragon his body is of a wolf's and he has the wings of a dragon he carries a book with a pencil in a bag on the side. his fur has four colors it has violet, pink, blue and cyan. his wings have 4 inch claws that help him grab onto the ground when he lands. his tail's end is also shaped like a spear head. He has an x pattern on the back it includes 3 colours blue cyan and purple.
Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Icewings
Inheritance: Cross: 75% IceWing 12.5% SkyWing, and 12.5% Wolf
Rank: Tracker
Family: Wolf and Are's
Sisters: Libra, Capricorn, Ruby, Gemini, Virgo
Brothers: Libra, Emvolo, Taurus, Leo, Grey, Pisces, Silven, Scorpio
Mate: n/a
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Sagitarius is good at hunting running and, he also has a very good patience
Special Abilities: He has intensified scent than other dragons.

Ice breath: He can breath ice which freezes whatever it touches but at his Young age it only makes it hard to move for 6 minutes after that the ice melts.
Weaknesses: He doesnt have thick skin so its easy to hurt him he also cannot stay in the air for along time because his muscles are very weak near the wings.
Combat Style: He hunts in packs with his family.
Background
History:
RP Sample: Sagitarius was hunting with his parents a pack of deer as he saw a large bear coming at him he didnt have time to think so he went head on with the bear. and what he did was stupid his parents found him wounded and unconcious. laying on the ground next to the dead bear....

Alrighty, first you need to add a couple more sentences to your personality. The minimum is five sentences. You need to add one more interest and dislike, as you should have at least three.'Teen' is not a rank. For rank, you must put what your character's job is within the tribe, such as Guardian or Healer. If he is training for one then you put "(insert rank here) apprentice". If you don't want him to have one, then put Citizen.

As for strengths and weaknesses, how patient is he? Why can't he stay in the air for long periods of time?

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Looking good so far, I would say the appearance needs a little more fleshing out, for example talk about your wings, tail.. any patterns in the fur.. etc. Just try to add some more detail to the character its so we can imagine the image. Another small thing I would say talk more about your fear for deep water, for example how does he react or maybe how did he get this fear.

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