Soul- [Re-approval needed]

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Personal Info
Name: Soul
Alias: N/A
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Sexuality: She doesn't care as long as they have the right qualities
Personality: Soul is a energetic dragon who loves to play pranks,she is a rather spunky dragon but she has a huge phobia of fire. She hate the day time because its to bright for her. She is most definitely NOT a morning person. Soul is a rather friendly dragon but gets really upset when someone mistakes her from a dragonett. She enjoys walking at night and looking at the stars as well as smelling flowers.
Interests: Stars, pretty flowers, Seawings
Dislikes: the sun. large male earth wings, scavengers.
Fears: Fire, and Closed spaces, great heights.

General Appearance
Height: 20 feet (shes a dwarf dragon)
Scales: silver flecked black scales
Eyes: bright violet eyes
Appearance: silver fleck black dragon, neon violet eyes, creme/ pale gold belly scales. Purple wings with red gradient, has 4-6 small holes and 1 large hole on left wing near her shoulder

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: none
Inheritance: Night wing-Earth wing crossover
Rank:rouge
Family: Mother: Fate. Father: Unknown
Mate: ShadedDeath (Shade)
Hatchlings: Paradox: Male, Quicksilver: Female, Karitoriki: Female

Background
History: her mother was a night wing, Fate, and her father was a Earth wing. One day (before she could fly) her father (who hated her) attacked Fate and killed her, he then threw Soul from the nest. Branches and Thorns tore at her wings. When she hit the ground a sharp rock cut her left wing. As she grew she tried to fly but ended up falling over and over. she grew friends with a Spunky firewing named Flare, as she was playing hide and seek on the beach a seawing pulled him into the water and drowned him, before his death her attempted to breath fire at the sea wings face, witch is now burnt on the sea wing left side.
RP Sample:"That's all you can do? Pffft. I can do Better than that. THIS is how you do it."

Skills and Abilities can go without sleep for a long time, tree climbing
Strengths: she is not the strongest but she packs a punch for her size
the fastest she cat go is 60-80 miles per hour but usually sticks to 10-20 MPH
she is very agile HOWEVER she pays no attention to her surroundings during the day.
Special Abilities: tree climbing; her claws have small,sharp notches in them that help her grip to the trees.
Weaknesses: flight; she cant fly very well and at the very most can glide for a few seconds due to the damage of her wings. attacks from above; she has no way to defend her self from and the very best she can do to defend her self is to find a shadow
Combat Style: climbs in trees and drops on enemy using back claws as grip while she tears at her enemy's face or belly.

Personality needs 5 sentences, detailed minimum.
Need three interests
Idk how a EW/NW would breed for timeline purposes. An admin will have to decide.
Height way too small for a EW hybrid, especially at age 12
Maybe more details in abilities, strengths and weaknesses.


Remember, annoy purple and red people in the cbox to read the app XD

Your skills and abilities section needed a lot more description than just lists of words that you are giving me. Strengths refers to how fast, strong and smart your character is at least. Special abilities, you need to describe what a tree climbing ability is (being able to scale up trees quickly?) Explain why she is weak against attacks from above or aerial flight?

Thanks for the feed back, ill start working on it right away!

is this better?

APPROVED

Moved for editing.

Editing complete!

Approved!