Maxeylius

Personal Info
Name: Maxeylius
Alias: Max
Age: 44 Dragon years
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: Maxeylius is a quiet creature, most of the time he is seen flying over the land looking for material to make weapons. Max likes to avoid questions asked by him and he is a master getting away. Max is an enthusiastic dragon that always tries to lift everybody's spirits up when they are down. Max is a very patient dragon, the only he got impatient was when he was an trainee waiting to see what rank he would be. Max has a short temper if someone complains about something he made he will ask them rhetorical questions like'' So can you make this armor? huh'' and ''do you know how long it took me to find this material!?!''
Interests: Bashing stuff, making weapons
Dislikes: Water,fire,small talk
Fears: Max has a phobia of unsymmetrical shapes and fire.

General Appearance
Height: 140 ft
Scales: Maxeylius' scales area mossy color and the tips are golden
Eyes: (Eye color) Green
Appearance: Maxeylius has an chopped off horn and a set of 2 eyes on each side of his face. He has oversized wings that act like hands and he has rough and bumpy rock like skin.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Earthwing
Rank: Vulcan
Family: Deceased
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Flying,Speed and strength
Special Abilities: Max can control the shattered shards of crystals around him and direct them. The problem with the ability however is that it takes a huge amount of energy and concentration and can only be used once a day.
Weaknesses: Fire,Water, Frost
Combat Style: Max prefers to fight close range with his spiked tail.

Background
History: Max is a Descendant of the slavery of the dragons his parents had died just before the slavery ended.
RP Sample: Max looked at the guardian complaining about the armor'' I asked if you can make brass armor not silver!'' Max kept on listening to the guardians about to blow his top''sir, if i can explain I ran out of brass and i only had silver so i decided to take the chance to make like that'' he explained.'' besides silver lasts longer than brass''he replied cassually .
(This is Jonin's alt)

The character is fine, just a few things about the RP. The dragons were captured generations ago, so unless your dragon is already over 1000 years old he can't be one of those captured, rather the descendant of them.

Otherwise, APPROVED.

Addition:

Could you increase your personality, around an extra 3 sentences. Also your special ability is fairly similar to a god power, could you add some limitations like cooldowns or limits to how much you can control.

ok i fixed it

Approved~

bump...waiting for approval

Well your character has already been approved. You just have to wait for Ark to give your colors ^^