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Yomyom the wish dragon
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Yomyom the wish dragon
Name: Yomyom
Alias: Wishy/ Spirit of the forest
Age: 1 Dragon Year
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Demisexual
Personality: Yomyom is one of the most friendliest playful dragons. He is still young so he is always learning many new things, you could say he is like a human toddler – Running around, playing and knocking things over. He loves playing with the forest animals and discovering new places. Unfortunately for him, his powers cause dandelions and pollen to appear more often wherever he goes, making him sneeze a lot. Everytime he sneezes, he will release a puff of pink/ purple smoke. Yomyom is very clumsy and often lets his curiosity get the better of him, always getting into trouble or causing problems.
Interests: Yomyom loves playing in the forest, running around and chasing rabbits. His favourite food is fruit, which he gets told off for because eating fruit is not very ‘dragon-like’. He enjoys being outside in the fresh air, mainly in the forest or in the sky.
Dislikes: Yomyom can’t stand it when humans leave their junk everywhere, it makes him so mad! He hates it when other dragons pick on others just because they think theyre better and most of all, he does not like busyness. Noise, crowds etc, it makes him feel all iffy inside.
Fears: Yomyom’s worst fear is fire. He isn’t too sure, but he remembers something bad happening when he was young, a fire of some kind.
General Appearance
Height: 2ft tall (feet to back)
Scales: Surprisingly, Yomyom is not like most dragons. Rather than having strong scales covering his body, he is instead covered in a fuzzy olive coloured fur. There are some parts of his body covered in light blue/pink scales however, along his spine, his feet, wings and tail.
Eyes: Amber
Appearance: Yomyom is a very small and fuzzy dragon. His head is quite squished up and doesn’t stick out like most dragons. He has large eyes which make him look ever so cute, fuzzy cat-like ears and two blue and pink feelers which sprout out his head. His wings are pink, blue and purple and are in the shape of a diamond. He has two other wing-like limbs which sprout out of the base of his hind legs, although they are not used for flight, they do have other properties. He has a long curly pink and blue tail. His wings and tail illuminate in the dark, giving off a bright blue and pink colour. His arms and legs are quite stubby and aren’t as elegant like most dragons. Although he does have claws, they are so small and covered in fur that he might as well not have any. He is quite a tubby little dragon and overall, is just a big bundle of fluffy joy.
Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Earthwing
Rank: Hatchling (training to be a healer)
Family: Yomyom doesn’t know who his parents are and spent most of his life growing up in the forest until one day, Earthwing took him in as their own. It is believed his parents were lightwing and earthwing dragons due to the magical properties he possesses.
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A
Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Yomyom is very skilled in healing and other ancient abilities. Yomyom is very good at supporting others in battle and due to his small size, he can is very nimble and agile when it comes to flight.
Special Abilities:
Fairy Dust: Yomyom leaves a trail of glowing yellow dust wherever he has been. He tends to stick the dust to himself to make him shine bright and blind other dragons so it is difficult for other dragons to look and aim at him directly. He can gather the dust to create small orbs which can be given to other dragons if they need to light up dark places.
Purple Puff: Yomyom inhales and will start to build up a magical energy inside his chest. His bellow will start tio glow a faint pink and when it is fully charged, he will blast a puff of purple/ pink glittery smoke from his mouth. This smoke will envelope the target and heal their wounds. Howver, due to the sheer intensity of this healing power, Yomyom will become very tired and drowsy afterwards.
Little Wishes [PLOT]: Yomyom is capable of granting wishes to other dragons. He has not fully mastered this ability yet, but it rarely happens. Even if he does grant wishes, the wishes are not very strong at all. These type of wishes range from things like, minor healing, giving a strength boost momentarily. Yomyom cannot use wishes for himself, wishes must be made by other dragons. Yomyom can only grant wishes to people if they have done a good deed. For example, if Yomyom is tangled up in vines and someone helps him out, he can grant them one wish. However, Yomyom is not aware of how this works and thinks wishes happen randomly. When Yomyom grants a wish, he forms a large dandelion ball in front of him which glows pink, the person will then wish for something and the dandelion will ‘poof’, granting the wish. ‘Little Wishes’ can’t be used in combat.
Weaknesses: Yomyom is scared of fire for a reason. Due to his lack of scales, it makes him very susceptible to fire and acid.
Combat Style: Yomyom is more of a support dragon than an attacking one. He does however have a very hard skull and can use his high speeds to ram into opponents. His strong jaw makes up for his lack of teeth, letting him crunch through strong metals and woods.
Background
History: Yomyom was born in an ancient forest. His parents passed down all their powers to him, however, they were both killed by rogue firewing dragons.
RP Sample: This was it… Yomyom the Fierce about to go in for the kill. He was perched on top of a mossy rock in a forest, his rear sticking up in the air and his glowing tail wagging around.
“Rarr!” Yomyom let out a measly little roar as he pounced forwards, landing on top of a butterfly…
He giggled and lifted up his big fluffy paw, the little butterfly fluttering away. Speaking in his childish voice, he started to fly after it, “Hey! Come back here Mr.Butterfly!”
He started bounding across the soft earth, trying to pick up the pace to actually start flying. His little diamond wings started flapping furiously, almost like a butterfly itself. With a quiet humming sound, his feet slowly lifted off the ground, “Now I gotcha!”
He started chasing the butterfly in mid-air, leaving a trail of glowing golden pollen behind him. He was quite a clumsy dragon, bumping into tree trunks whenever he tried to change direction. He then came out to a clearing, a big glade with beautiful sapphire waters. He decided he’d catch Mr.Butterfly another day, so he ‘delicately’ landed on the ground next to the water. He dipped his head low and started drinking the water, making a loud slurping sound with his long tongue.
Last edited by oRequiem on Mon Aug 24, 2015 6:03 am; edited 6 times in total
Yomyom- EarthWing Hatchling
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Re: Yomyom the wish dragon
I see you have 5 special abilities there. For the time being, especially because you are a hatchling, you might want to limit it down to 2 abilities which you really want the most.
Wishes: Granting wishes is deemed overpowered at this point, as it is something that a dragon equivalent to a God can do. Even if you haven't mastered it yet, something does happen from wishing right? In case Yomyom gets involved in combat, he could simply wish for his foes to die and resolve the conflict with ease. Although you are a wish dragon, you might want to describe what kind of wishes you grant (preferably small ones that will only give a small advantages/benefits to others at best) and any specific limits. E.g. One wish a week?
Purple Puff: As a general rule, abilities should have certain drawbacks (e.g. leaves the user tired for a while). Because you have a healing ability, the drawback/cost would have to be pretty big.
Flutter: Also overpowered. Although Yomyom does have a small mass that allows him to fly faster, to fly that he appears as a 'light streak' means you will need a huge drawback. Even then, I don't think you need to put this as an ability. You can add 'high speed' as one of your strengths instead.
Dream Dome: Maybe add a duration to this imprisoning ability. I'm also scared that it's a bit overpowered. Maybe also add a small weakness to this dome.
You will also need to include an RP sample to show us your style of RPing. Anything at least 4 sentences would do. You can have Yomyom hunting food, going for a swim, chasing butterflies etc.
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Overall, just 'nerf' the special abilities and give us a paragraph of you RPing your character, and you're good to go!
Regards,
Wishes: Granting wishes is deemed overpowered at this point, as it is something that a dragon equivalent to a God can do. Even if you haven't mastered it yet, something does happen from wishing right? In case Yomyom gets involved in combat, he could simply wish for his foes to die and resolve the conflict with ease. Although you are a wish dragon, you might want to describe what kind of wishes you grant (preferably small ones that will only give a small advantages/benefits to others at best) and any specific limits. E.g. One wish a week?
Purple Puff: As a general rule, abilities should have certain drawbacks (e.g. leaves the user tired for a while). Because you have a healing ability, the drawback/cost would have to be pretty big.
Flutter: Also overpowered. Although Yomyom does have a small mass that allows him to fly faster, to fly that he appears as a 'light streak' means you will need a huge drawback. Even then, I don't think you need to put this as an ability. You can add 'high speed' as one of your strengths instead.
Dream Dome: Maybe add a duration to this imprisoning ability. I'm also scared that it's a bit overpowered. Maybe also add a small weakness to this dome.
You will also need to include an RP sample to show us your style of RPing. Anything at least 4 sentences would do. You can have Yomyom hunting food, going for a swim, chasing butterflies etc.
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Overall, just 'nerf' the special abilities and give us a paragraph of you RPing your character, and you're good to go!
Regards,
Sly- NightWing Enforcer
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Re: Yomyom the wish dragon
Well now this seems okay for me, just a few comments though :
Fairy Dust - I don't really see how putting the dust on yourself is supposed to make you hard to see. A bright ball of fur doesn't look like the kind of things I'd miss XD But otherwise it's not a concern on the ability itself, I kinda like the idea of a stealth powder. Perhaps you could make it so it changed color and so makes you hard to see by blending your fur in your surroundings ?
Dream Dome - Considering you're an hatchling, that shield size seems a bit too much. I'd say to tone it down to only shield you, and have its size and durability increase when your character will grow up
Little Wishes - The tone down is fine. Just an idea, but maybe in some topics we could plan and allow a bigger, game-changing wish to be made. That way we keep it not overpowered, but in some planned occasion it would get more interesting
Fairy Dust - I don't really see how putting the dust on yourself is supposed to make you hard to see. A bright ball of fur doesn't look like the kind of things I'd miss XD But otherwise it's not a concern on the ability itself, I kinda like the idea of a stealth powder. Perhaps you could make it so it changed color and so makes you hard to see by blending your fur in your surroundings ?
Dream Dome - Considering you're an hatchling, that shield size seems a bit too much. I'd say to tone it down to only shield you, and have its size and durability increase when your character will grow up
Little Wishes - The tone down is fine. Just an idea, but maybe in some topics we could plan and allow a bigger, game-changing wish to be made. That way we keep it not overpowered, but in some planned occasion it would get more interesting
Hyruu- LightWing Hunter
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Re: Yomyom the wish dragon
Alright, APPROVED !
Hyruu- LightWing Hunter
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Re: Yomyom the wish dragon
Changed your name, to fit your character for you and your now an Earthwing
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