Gorthalon the black

Personal Info
Name: Gorthalon
Alias: EVIL
Age: 1,000 human years
Gender: male
Personality: proud,greedy his treasure hoard is vast, and power hungry
Interests: increasing his hoard,hunting,finding a life mate
Dislikes: dealing with inferior creatures (everything but a dragon)
Fears: defeat

General Appearance
Height: 10 meters tall
Scales: black,they have a chainmail like pattern
Eyes: a misty grey
Appearance: tall ridged scaly wings four horns portruding from tail and head

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: fire wing
Rank: guardian
Family: his beloved mother was killed by his siblings all were killed by gorthalon
Mate: killed in her sleep
Hatchlings: a brood of five

Skills and Abilities
Dtrengths: iron will,brute strength,exellent cunning and knowledge
Special abilities: excellent observation skills and cunning
Weaknesses: blind in left eye could be taking advantage of and small p.s. you could consider his love for his hatchlings a Weakness
Combat style: loves to observe prey for long periods then use brute force

Background
History: his mother was the only one who truly loved him (besides mate)when she was killed by his siblings he could not control his blood lust and slain them all,300 years later he mated with his tue love but she was killed in sleep he was fully evil by then and now the only ones he loves is his children
Rp sample: i do any types of rp

T-that's dark dude... Well 10 meters is good... For a rank do in brackets what actually is the rank because Y'know... We sorta like need it?

And man... That is dark! Well.... I have nothing left to say just wow o.o
Edit: Well..... One thing, please wait for your app to be approved before you RP? But idk I didnt wait either

Edit edit : why are you already yellow? That's bad if your new you shouldn't be so a mod change to green or tell me something or why?

Well, the application is very sloppy. In my opinion. For some odd reason I think that you MIGHT have done something wrong on the application. Also some things look to be overpowered.
^MY OPINON. I DON'T KNOW IF THIS IS WHAT THE ADMINS THINK.
Edit- You are a tiny tiny dragon. When I converted 10 meters to feet you are only 33 feet.

okay if you think my dragons op then please tell me why so I can change it

Just your special ability. Everything else is fine. I looked over it again. Just the special ability, but as I said earlier I am not an admin so I can't determine that, but my opinon.

okay I altered the special abilitie so thats good

Ok, it looks good, and ready to be approved.

Thanks

Your welcome. I will probaly drag Phantom, or somebody out so they can accept.

The card looks ok, however you need to tell which rank your dragon is going to have.

I have fixed the card so it can follow the format.

thanks that would be nice

*Gorthalon wrote:thanks that would be nice

So which rank would you like to have? I have already told you in the chat the ranks available (guardian, tracker, healer and vulcan)

I would prefer gaurdian

*Gorthalon wrote:I would prefer gaurdian

Very nice Your card is approved

Thanks mighty Atlantis

So should I move this to approved Firewings?

sure