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ORKEV(edit)
Type of Character: Dragon
Link to Character List Page:
Personal Info
Name: orkev
[b]Age:27
[b]Gender: male
[b]Sexuality: heterosexual
[b]Personality: shy/bashful is also very smart and loves to read the wrightings of the tombs and relics and also act like a lost puppy sometimes when he is confused
[b]Fears: squids
[b]Strengths: spike crystal scales that cause anything that hit it hard enough to self harm them self's . crystal cutting to trade the cut crystal with other dragons and tribes
c[b]Weaknesses: loses all thought clarity when in berserk mode Can.t handle seeing hatchling dead and has a weakness to pyrite drains him of his energy to the point where he can't even use his abilities. takes 4 post to complete drain him. 8 post to return to normal
[b]General Appearance
Height: 100 feet
[b]Scales: crystal blue and shiny and spiky
[b]Eyes: silver
[b]Appearance: has spiky crystal scales that are shiny under direct light has silver colored claws which might be silver
[b]Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: rouge
[b]Inheritance: pure bread earthwing
[b]Rank: none
[b]Family:[n/a]
[b]Mate:[n/a]
[b]Hatchlings:[n/a]
[b]Skills and Abilities
Normal Abilities: acid breath that can melts metal to softer substance to be able to eaten and underground senses can sense any animal or creatures that are digging underground
[b]Special Abilities: crystal shard breath can shoot 10 shards of crystal that are 30 foot long at a range of 50 feet. 40 total, with 10 that can be made at a time, with two posts between each conjuring of them.
[b]Combat Style: uses crystal shard breath to attack at range. orkev hits hard and he uses ambush tactics if he thinks he outnumbered. will go berserk when enrage
[b]Background
History: was abounded after hatching in a cave that also had a tomb in it.
Has been living alone and watching other dragons and animals to learn how to hunt and survive
[b]RP Sample: why would I believe anything a mad man has to say.
Link to Character List Page:
Personal Info
Name: orkev
[b]Age:27
[b]Gender: male
[b]Sexuality: heterosexual
[b]Personality: shy/bashful is also very smart and loves to read the wrightings of the tombs and relics and also act like a lost puppy sometimes when he is confused
[b]Fears: squids
[b]Strengths: spike crystal scales that cause anything that hit it hard enough to self harm them self's . crystal cutting to trade the cut crystal with other dragons and tribes
c[b]Weaknesses: loses all thought clarity when in berserk mode Can.t handle seeing hatchling dead and has a weakness to pyrite drains him of his energy to the point where he can't even use his abilities. takes 4 post to complete drain him. 8 post to return to normal
[b]General Appearance
Height: 100 feet
[b]Scales: crystal blue and shiny and spiky
[b]Eyes: silver
[b]Appearance: has spiky crystal scales that are shiny under direct light has silver colored claws which might be silver
[b]Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: rouge
[b]Inheritance: pure bread earthwing
[b]Rank: none
[b]Family:[n/a]
[b]Mate:[n/a]
[b]Hatchlings:[n/a]
[b]Skills and Abilities
Normal Abilities: acid breath that can melts metal to softer substance to be able to eaten and underground senses can sense any animal or creatures that are digging underground
[b]Special Abilities: crystal shard breath can shoot 10 shards of crystal that are 30 foot long at a range of 50 feet. 40 total, with 10 that can be made at a time, with two posts between each conjuring of them.
[b]Combat Style: uses crystal shard breath to attack at range. orkev hits hard and he uses ambush tactics if he thinks he outnumbered. will go berserk when enrage
[b]Background
History: was abounded after hatching in a cave that also had a tomb in it.
Has been living alone and watching other dragons and animals to learn how to hunt and survive
[b]RP Sample: why would I believe anything a mad man has to say.
Last edited by Orkev on Sun Jun 23, 2019 1:03 pm; edited 18 times in total (Reason for editing : weakness)
Orkev-
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
Okay so to start off, lets get the abilities out of the way.
First, how far does your acid/crystal breath reach? As a 7 foot dragon I could imagine the acid reach some twenty to thirty feet and the crystal reaching up to maybe 15 feet? What are their effects? Be sure to add this kind of stuff in your app.
As for your underground senses, again how far does it go? What all can you sense?
First, how far does your acid/crystal breath reach? As a 7 foot dragon I could imagine the acid reach some twenty to thirty feet and the crystal reaching up to maybe 15 feet? What are their effects? Be sure to add this kind of stuff in your app.
As for your underground senses, again how far does it go? What all can you sense?
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
Approved
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
Out for edits
Baldirak Sapiens Draco- Grand Champion Y1 Earthwing King
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
Re-approved
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
Out for edits.
Baldirak Sapiens Draco- Grand Champion Y1 Earthwing King
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
I change age and size and updated my shard breath to fit my size
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
You have that the crystal shards will get bigger and sharper as he grows, but as he is now at the max height, he is done growing, so you need to remove that line.
Baldirak Sapiens Draco- Grand Champion Y1 Earthwing King
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
fixed shard breath
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
Re-approved.
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
App is out for editing and unapproved until more acceptable weaknesses are added.
Baldirak Sapiens Draco- Grand Champion Y1 Earthwing King
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
okay how are theses weakness
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
"Stomach is the biggest weakness, but if you hit hard enough you can break bones."
The stomach thing needs to be removed. It's an obvious weakness that every dragon has and therefore doesn't really count as a valid weakness. Also, the way that sentence is worded, it makes it sound like hitting you in the stomach hard enough with break bones... which it won't. So remove that.
The stomach thing needs to be removed. It's an obvious weakness that every dragon has and therefore doesn't really count as a valid weakness. Also, the way that sentence is worded, it makes it sound like hitting you in the stomach hard enough with break bones... which it won't. So remove that.
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
One more thing needed. How long does it take for him to become drained to where he can't use his abilities?
Baldirak Sapiens Draco- Grand Champion Y1 Earthwing King
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
okay how bout now
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Re: ORKEV(edit)
Approved. You may now continue roleplaying.
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