Thoughtlistener the NightWing

Personal Info
Name: Thoughtlistener
Alias: Thought
Age: 18 (Newly matured)
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: Silent, shy, distrusting, cautious, clever. Thoughtlistener tries to look inconspicuous but everyone seems to notice her presence due to her past. Because of this she is cautious and trusts no one. She is a terrific strategist and as talent for spying, but it seems to her that no one recognises her worth. This makes her very depressed.
Interests: Death, secrets, truth, the Dragon condition, legends
Dislikes: Money, corruption, greed, unfairness
Fears: Noise, being in the spotlight, public speaking

General Appearance
Height: 22' 4''
Scales: Violet/Indigo/Maroon/Silver; Several oustanding scales in maroon/silver; indigo underbelly; violet scales
Eyes: Indigo
Appearance: Scales shimmer in the light; tries to look small and nonthreatening; no accessories so far

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: NightWing
Inheritance: Purebred
Rank: Citizen
Family: Unknown
Mate: Single and Semi-Looking
Hatchlings: None

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Swift, clever, can anticipate enemies' moves
Special Abilities: Telepathy; no limit, range of 3 miles radius, can drop in at will but has difficulty leaving angry, violent minds
Weaknesses: Isn't very strong, is emotionally weak
Combat Style: Overwhelm with speed, hit and retreat, use telepathy to avoid incoming attacks

Background
History: Nobody knows where Thoughtlistener really came from. One day, she just seemed to appear. Nobody pays attention to her, but there are rumors the gods sent her as a valuable asset to the Tribe... or as its destruction. As a result, she is seen by many as evil and few as important, but she doesn't seem to mind. On the inside though, she hates herself for this.
On Thought's point of view, she simply woke up one day in the Deadlands of NightWing territory with her memory wiped. The only thing she can recall from her past is a destructive fire.
RP Sample: Thoughtlistener crouched low to the ground, the scent of lamb making her mouth water. She loved mutton. More than anything else, in fact.
Her target grazed in ignorant bliss by a pool. Thought gathered up her black mist in her throat and swished her tail in anticipation. Just when the lamb heard her and turned to bolt, the NightWing stunned the sheep with the mist. It tumbled head over heels and fell asleep. Quickly Thoughtlistener ran to the sheep, dispatched it with a swift blow to the head, and swallowed it whole. Satisfied, she took to the sky.

Two things I see here. First of all, your personality is too short, we require 5 sentences for a baseline so that your character can be understood well. The second is your telepathy ability. How does it work? Is there a limit on how much you can use it? What's the range on it?

Bump when finished.

Tezz wrote:Two things I see here. First of all, your personality is too short, we require 5 sentences for a baseline so that your character can be understood well. The second is your telepathy ability. How does it work? Is there a limit on how much you can use it? What's the range on it?

Bump when finished.

Have you read book 6 of the original Wings of Fire?? I thought the staff know what that is! That is shocking... this site seemed to be based on Wings of Fire.... clearly I was wrong. Telepathy is based on Moonwatcher's telepathy... it is a NightWing skill... in the books....

It works by hearing other dragon's thoughts in your head, and adult dragons can do this at will. There is no limit to it. The range is a several mile radius.

Here its for the Gods. They wouldnt let me have it.

Thoughtlistener wrote:

Tezz wrote:Two things I see here. First of all, your personality is too short, we require 5 sentences for a baseline so that your character can be understood well. The second is your telepathy ability. How does it work? Is there a limit on how much you can use it? What's the range on it?

Bump when finished.

Have you read book 6 of the original Wings of Fire?? I thought the staff know what that is! That is shocking... this site seemed to be based on Wings of Fire.... clearly I was wrong. Telepathy is based on Moonwatcher's telepathy... it is a NightWing skill... in the books....

It works by hearing other dragon's thoughts in your head, and adult dragons can do this at will. There is no limit to it. The range is a several mile radius.

As character apps are accessible to all members to plan out roleplay opportunities, we ask that all aspects of an application are understandable with little outside knowledge. Not every member on the site has read the Wings of Fire series, and while they may serve as inspiration the world of Pyrria is its own separate entity here. I would ask that you explain how the ability works in full detail, without referring others to a resource off of our site.

Additionally your height of 4'8" is well under the NightWing minimum height of 20ft.

Bump when finished.

Sorry 'bout the shock. Bumper cars.

Sorry to interupt, but telepathy is a banned ability as you could easily see the other dragons moves and thoughts and overall just easily dodge them and beat them.

And like Tezz said, yes it is based off of the books but to make it more fair for everyone it is still different. As you can tell, we have a group called the 'FireWings' and they are the only dragons that can breath fire, and EarthWings and LightWings used to be MudWings and RainWings. So sadly, this is not an exactly WoF match.

As for strengths, how swift is she? How fast can she fly? Also, when you say anticipate enemies' moves can she know what they're going to do every time?

I got to go for now, but please fix what we have asked you to fix.

Moving to declined due to over 2 weeks since an update. Contact me if you wish to take it out and continue.