Locrisis, Brute of the Winds

Personal Info
Name:Locrisis
Alias:
Age:40
Gender:Male
Sexuality:Heterosexual
Personality:Locrisis is mostly a mean bag of scales, taunting everyone he hates. But at times he can be nice, giving off kind vibes to others around him, masking his hatful manner. He doesn’t truly care about anything other than his own rank and his life, even though he says he cares about other things. He can be a hateful bag of scales, but he does fight for his tribe and his tribe’s honor, as a warrior. He mostly hates his mistake that he made.
Interests:
-Fighting
-Making others angry
-And his tribe and rank.
Dislikes:
-Other Dragons
-Losing his place in the ranks
-His mistake
Fears:He fears that his life would be ruined because of what he did.

General Appearance
Height:Forty Feet
Scales:His scales are a deep red, with hints of black in them
Eyes:His left eye is clouded, with a scar going through it. His right eye is a deep amber color.
Appearance:His appearance consists of full body armor, that most foes cannot break through, he is quite bulky, he carries a claymore(Greatsword) on his back that he will use in battles.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe:SkyWing
Inheritance:FireWing.
Rank:Warrior
Family:Livian and Sparks
Mate:Livian
Hatchlings:Sparks

Skills and Abilities
Strengths:He relies on his strength, mobility, and intelligence to best his opponents.

Special Abilities:He has the ability to breathe fire, as with his FireWing heritage. He can also ‘slimmer’, a technique that allows the user to become invisible, but still stays in plain sight, its like hiding yourself in a blanket of space and time.
Weaknesses:His ‘slimmering’ has a short time limit of about two minutes. It is used for hiding, but he only uses it to ambush others
Combat Style:His fighting style varies between brute strength and calculating force.

Background
History:
RP Sample:

Locrisis's Theme:(WIP because of site servers....)

He can become invisible but stays in plain sight?

It basically hiding your outline/aura from sight, or to put it more simple, it 'blinds' others. We all have that seventh sense of being watched, and the eighth sense of anger. This hides the user in plain sight, using a cloaking technique. it takes time to preform it though.

It hides the user in plain sight, by covering them in a blanket of non-existence. They still exist, and are only hidden to those that are not trained to notice such an ability for two minutes.

In weaknesses, you state it is for hiding, but he only uses it for ambushing others. That's not exactly a weakness.

So in addition to making you invisible, it blocks a person's sense of feeling like they're being watched? You ought to include that, for the sake of being detailed.

(The ambush thing is just a little detail, notjing worth paying attention to. It is timee. That's the weaknesses.

If the ambush thing isn't a weakness, it doesn't need to be there. Also, does he have any other weaknesses not related to his ability? And I just noticed his appearance. If he uses the sword in battles, you should go into more detail about it. Can it pierce a Dragon's hide, does it work better against an unarmored foe?

Yeah, he is a work in progress... I have many things to update. I also gotta change meh PFP XD it sucks.

Well, if you aren't ready for this to be reviewed, you should put WIP in the title.