Hunter Dracon: Bane of the Corrupted

The link to the document is here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iieKE0bu4-7x-4frK5q_U59rNlrDP5SOBKRMgZdJvUs/edit

Hello and welcome to DRF, Hunter Dracon! I'm Cosmos, an Administrator here. We only accept dragons and other acceptable variations to that species. Please fill out designated fields with our character creation template. And please take a look at the following link and resubmit your application!

http://www.rpgdragons.org/t1723-new-members-guide

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No. It's not eligible for approval. It denied me access to view it, but please post the character application and template here. ^^

I apologize for that. I won't copy and paste the file here as i can't get the images to show up. I fixed the document and i hope you enjoy it.

The smallest size is 20 feet for a rogue

Hunter is a night fury. Do you want me to write his height if he's standing up on two legs or his height on all fours?

Hey there and welcome to the forums! Like Cosmos said, we will need to get your app posted in a topic and not in another document. You'll just need to find a site to host your images if you don't have their link, it's fairly easy to find. We won't be able to approve you until you do so.

As for the character himself I'm sorry to say there are a few things we can't allow. Mainly his ability to change to human, as we do not allow human characters.
The plasma shoot is also way too powerful, in all its aspects : fire rate is just too high, too powerful and too precise. Should you want to retain that "sniper" aspect you'll need to seriously tone that down. I'd suggest having the ability to breathe some sort of acid spit (if you don't mind having some Earthwing heritage) or light beam (if you don't mind having some Lightwing heritage) that would be thin and concentrated compared to the normal breath attack, inflicting serious damage in an extremely small radius, with most range than other dragons (but not insanely high either).

Minimal size of a dragon is 10 feet standing on all fours and that's only if you're a Skywing, otherwise you'll need at least 20 feet. You'll also need to throw in another weakness as your kit is overall really powerful even with the changes I suggested, and your two last weaknesses aren't really valid (eels is a fear, not a weakness, and holding someone as hostage is not specific to you).

And just for information Rogues have no ranks, so no point in putting them.