Attor (Done)

Personal Info
Name: Attor
Alias: Venomous King
Age: 91
Gender: Male

Personality: Attor has a high sense of humor, making jokes even during a fight and making his enemies more anger, which makes it the more enjoyable when they try to attack him when they cannot calm down. He fights mainly for his family, doing what he can to make sure he can protect them in anyway necessary. He is calm, relaxed, and is just a chill dragon, usually he does not fight, sparing and practicing medicines and poisons in a different story though. He is a master tactician of war, making sure to use many of his poisons, his scale-like armor (which had grown on his like regular scales) is covered in a natural venom from which he can use as he pleases and retract in his body, he can even turn the poison into a toxic gas that could kill another dragon in minutes. As of recent, Attor became a high sovereign of the Order of Starlights, the merged groups of SkyWings and LightWings. He became slightly serious, handling the entirety of the two kingdoms and their people. He cares for the citizens, granted he isn't the best at what position he is in, Attor does his hardest to make sure everything is upkept and that most are pleased. However, he will immediately put down any voice that speaks with hostility towards him abd hus people, and will immediately dismiss the dragon that takes a rude or angered tone with him.

Interests: Medicines and poisons, hanging out, taking care of his egg, he does enjoy healing others and crafting venoms and poisons for them which does come at a price.
Dislikes: Disruptions during his crafting, wasting poisons and medicines, having to repair his own scales/armor
Fears: Since a sovereign, Attor is afraid of losing his peoples interest, furthermore he fears of losing the entirety of the kingdom or even something bad happening to it. His greatest fear above all is losing his daughter, Yama, as she is a young adult abd will di stupid things he is afraid of her getting killed by anything or anyone.

General Appearance
Height: 35 ft
Scales: Growing from the smoothest tissue at a larvae form, the Venom Dragon grows the tissue into thick armored plating with scales growing underneath them for defensive purposes. Naturally, the armored plating that grows like scales has mainly a greenish-blue color to it, the green splotches along the armored scales/plating, with a long single streak of purple going below his armor.

Eyes: yellow slit on the left and red on the right
Appearance:

Main Appearance:

A combination of insect and dragon, Attor has not only a regular skeleton, but also an armored exoskeleton on the outside of his body, being covered by the tough and thick armored plating and underneath them tough scales. Due to his pairs of wings he can fly extremely fast for hours without tire, thanks to constant beats of them as well as the surprising light weight of his body.


Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: SkyWing. Attor is 60EW/40SkW hybrid.
Rank: King
Family: Deceased:
Tory: Female Nightshade Dragon:

Tory's Appearance:

Mate: No one yet, he's open though
Hatchlings:
Yama: Female Nightshade: Young Adult

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Always before battle Attor makes sure he has poisons and, and being used to medicines and poisons he can use to gain an advantage with. Thanks to his years of using and injecting poisons Attor has gained an immunity to his own poisons, to add he also gained a stronge resistance against weaker and lesser poisons abd toxins.

Special Abilities:
Toxic Body: Due to the amount of toxins and poisons Attor deals with everyday his body absorbed some of it in the past and has become part of his flesh, blood, and fluids. He use his own blood for medicines and for poisons, allowing himself to use, well, himself in this way. Attor can cover himself in a scentless and invisible poison so when he deals a strike on an enemy the poison and be spilt into their wound and work slowly throughout their body, but the most notable weapon he has the stinger, being filled with a dangerous poison that slowly shuts down certain nerves (ex: it can be anywhere from where there is a wound thats come in contact with the poison, say if its a toe it wirks slowly to shut diwn the nerve system of the toe, same applies to an arm or even a neck or wing) of its victim, and after that it will aim for the heart. These two poisons derive from the same venom, granted the one that covers his armor and scales is less lethal and slower, it causes the dragon to feel sick and weak as battle continues. While it doesn't kill them on spot if not treated right away it could be a danger to the inflicted.
Heres the list of sizes of hiw this poison works: anywhere from 20-60ft it typically takes 30 of the opposers turns for half the effect to work which is minor illness (going about 35%), another 25 for the full effect of weakness and sickness to sink in (100%).
70-110ft takes 40 opposing turns for partial effect (30%) to anothet 35 (100%)
120ft-160ft takes 32 for partial effects (10%) to 12 (50%) to another 20 100%).
Pureblood EWs are not affected, however, any of those who are not Pureblood it will affrct with hiw much heritage they dont have. Example: if you are 50EW/50SW the poison only has half effects, or if you are 30EW/70FW yiu will be affected much more. The less EW heritage the, the more damage the poison does, the less heritage the more it effects.

Blood-Scald Venom: the very poison in the stinger, this is a venom only found on Attors species as it is only one of a kind, pretty much insectoid-dragons. Granted children if these dragons can inherit such a poison they must have fangs or a stinger fir such. Blood-Scald Venom, as it is named, is injected into a dragon, once thus has happened and the venom flows through veins and flesh in time. It has a much swifter rate of poisoning the victim than the outer poison that covers the scales, attacking the nerves and blood of the dragon by causing inflammatory and eventually causing the searing pain that follows, which spreads through the entirety of the body in due time.
Heres a list, same sizes applied fir the outer poison:
20-60ft dragons take 20% of venom effects every 15 turns (their turns of course, if mine were added then it'd be an easy victory :p). In total: 75 turns.
70-110ft dragons take 25% every 25 turns, in total: 100 turns
120ft-160ft dragons take 25% of effects every 35 turns, in total: 140 turns.
Pureblood EWs are not affected, however, any of those who are not Pureblood it will affrct with hiw much heritage they dont have. Example: if you are 50EW/50SW the poison only has half effects, or if you are 30EW/70FW yiu will be affected much more. The less EW heritage the, the more damage the poison does, the less heritage the more it effects.

Weaknesses: He is subtle to ice, very cold temperatures can out him to sleep. He can swim but he cannot fly with his wings being wet, although they are very tough if they are damaged he is completely screwed, and being subtle to fire (due to his insectoide body part) his body is not as resistant to fire as other dragons, his body can quickly heat up and he can start catching ablaze if too much fire is applied. Another problem to add, whilst lesser ahs weaker poisons have very little effect of him very powerful and potent poisons tend to do the trick if one can get past his exoskeleton and hard plating.

Combat Style: Stealth, speed, and intelligence, Attor has the strength to knock a dragon bigger than himself down, but his main course of action is sitting, waiting the enemy, and using toxins, being more of a hit and run fighter, some may call him a coward, in all reality he is just playing it smart.

Background
History: Attor was born as an outcast, being abandoned by his own tribe due to the fact of his abnormal appearance. He was found a by Nightshade dragon from a small clan of its same race, seeing the odd hatchling left in the open for anything to snatch it up, she took in the odd dragon and would take it to her clan. When they all saw it, the elder described it as a larvae hatchling, a creature that will mature into a dangerous and stealthy assassin of poison. The others began to look at the hatchling this way, and considered him part of them until he would grow, the  they will have rid of him to keep peace around the clan. Many years of hard work and growing passed, and thus Attor came to be, but he was no assassin as the elder described, he was the clans healer, but most notably one of their hunters. He began his hunting with another pack of Nightshade's, who in returned respected him for the many trails and medical cares he had accomplished in the past. There were two females out of the eight males, both being cousins. Tory was the more slender and smaller female, while Annuli was the more muscular female, looking more like the males size. Together they all hunted, Attor healing them form any toxins or wounds they received, but there were many times when he had received the most kills in prey and the such, gaining the glory and honor, but he did not care for that, he only cared for the rest of his pack. He may not have been very large, in fact the Nightshades were larger then him except for the females, yet he was much more faster and stronger in every way. One day, he left the clan, leaving all with goodbyes and farewells, but Tory came along with him, seeing the two had gotten along so well, the two went off and embarked on a great journey. More years passed on, through rigged frozen hills, to flooded swampy ruins, to dangerous molten mountains, and finally, after years of traveling together as a couple, they finally got married in the rich grass plains, where they would happily love their lives... until death do them part. Tory had received a cancer a week after she had lain an egg, a cancer that would lead from her spine to her brain, Attor did all he could to heal her fast, but there was nothing he could do. Attor could do nothing for this cancer, and he could only sit and wait for Tory's death, and the last thing she said was to take care of their child and to make sure it will learn to survive and fend for itself, to watch over it as Attor became the parent and guardian of this hatchling. The last time Attor saw Tory was when he burnt her body and spread her ashes across the very plains, the last place she wanted them to be spread so her spirit could guard and guide them throughout their lives. Attor pulled himself together, now having accepting that his wife was deceased, his new objective was to care of the egg, and find a new tribe. He had not been too keen on staying as a rogue, so he joined the SkyWings as a healer, doing what he can to ensure all safety and cures of sickness, but at times, he may go into battle as a stealth unit and take out whatever may come his way.

RP Sample: Attor flew amongst the plains and above his nest in a large tree, recently joining the SkyWings, he carefully wrapped the egg in a smooth cloth, making sure it would not fall out and carrying the bag-like cloth with his mouth. Ever since the death of his wife he had been depressed, but could not wait for the Nightshade hatchling that would come about. He knew how big Nightshades could get, males gaining at least 60ft in height, and females about 50ft, this was going to be a long life, hopefully a happy one though. he neared the home of the SkyWings, hours of flight and finally he was there, where he would receive his den and begin to build shelves of his own and a nest for his egg, making sure it was safe at all costs.

Okay, done.

Having both an extremely armored body (from scales and exoskeleton) and the dexterity from an insect seems a bit unbalanced to me. Either removing the dexterity (by this I mean being on par with a standard dragon) or adding another weakness should do the trick. Something I can think of, due to the insectoid nature of your character, would be that any wound he receives would be worse than if it would be on a regular dragon (due to his body rarely ever receiving those and so the flesh not being so resistant). Anyway the choice is yours.

Hey, I'm finished.

Seems better to me. Approved !

Out for edits

Done and done. Let me know if there are problems.

Could you tell me what changes you made?

Special abilities, rank, personality and fears. I know for the ability part there might be questions raised, but, if not Id be surprised XD not trying to make too overpowering characters but trying to make something with that stinger of his

Well, if you want those abilites, you need to give Attor EarthWing heritage then weaken them to be more appropriate for a hybrid.

Done I suppose.

So for the first ability, 20-60ft Dragons will experience 100% of the effects of the toxin, 70-110ft will only experinece 90%, and 120-160 will only experience 85%? Why is that?

Next, it needs to be stated somewhere in your app, preferably under tribe info, that you have EarthWing heritage and how much.

I fixed it, I added the whole heritage thing to the tribe part

One more thing I just noticed. He applies some sort of toxin to his teeth and claws before a battle? Does he really need to do that? He already has the Toxic Body and Blood-Scald Venom. And what do you mean by poison-like acid? Does it do something other than melt scales and earth?

And fixed

Re-approved