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Not the best oc,but it's a start.:/
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Not the best oc,but it's a start.:/
Name: Finely(No last name)
Alias: N/A
Age: About 5/me)6(Related to human acts at that age)
Gender: Male
Personality: Very outgoing, Likes everyone (mostly),Yet (due to the young age)Acts tough and thinks he's better than everyone. Sometimes has mental breakdowns and Flips out when he doesn't get what he wants, yet will drop his Tough(seeming) exterior to help a friend in need. All in all, He is a "Good" dragon who Assists when needed and Works to the best of his ability.
(Still working on it! Sorry if you hate it!!!!)
Interests: Likes playing, Acting tough, and pulling pranks
Dislikes: Getting bested ,Getting embarrassed, Getting talked to like Im a little kid! And Pears, I HATE pears
Fears: Scared of the dark(secretly), Scared of betrayal, Scared of Heights(ironically), Agraphobia, Fear of
Being immobilized, Scared of being forgotten, And fear of being alone.
Height: 15 feet(Really small, not because of tribe.)
Scales: *Slight blue tint due to original birth area*/Orange and a bit of gold
Eyes: Red
Appearance: Has a necklace with all birthstones which he treasures dearly. He also carries a small dagger, along with a set of lockpicks and a map.
Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Was hatched/ Grew up in a skywing Tribe, yet Was actually born a seawing.
Rank: (For the most part)Still a hatchling
Family: (Orphaned/Parents are dead/no kin)
Mate: Too young!
Hatchlings: Also to young.
Skills and Abilities
Strengths: I'm Good at Small talk, Bargaining, running, Smarts, Good at making relationships(not in a mating way)With other tribes.
Special Abilities: Has Some attributes from his original birth place, Telepathy, Magic(To a limited extent),a "Potential power Type of thing, Various other/etc.
Weaknesses: Mental breakdowns, Seeing people get hurt, Betrayal.
Combat Style: #1/Constant movement, leaping around until the perfect opportunity to dash in and Attack my foe. #2/Being smaller allows me to toy with my opponents weight. I simply adjust myself in order to receive their attack and redirect it, making them harm themselves in the process. #3/Using various flight manuvers and magic to defeat an opresser,(Results vary)
Background
History: Was an Egg while in Seawing territory, Yet was "stolen" and "Hatched" In skywing territory and "Grew up" There. Once there, I slowly adapted to The tribe and its territory, losing what made me a seawing, like my gills/"webbed feet". Due to the climate change from the territories, I grow/age EXTREMELLY slow, so I'm still the age I Was(basically)when I came To the tribe.(Because of age, I will build on my story from there)
RP Sample :Im take roleplay very seriously, I'll be just fine.
Alias: N/A
Age: About 5/me)6(Related to human acts at that age)
Gender: Male
Personality: Very outgoing, Likes everyone (mostly),Yet (due to the young age)Acts tough and thinks he's better than everyone. Sometimes has mental breakdowns and Flips out when he doesn't get what he wants, yet will drop his Tough(seeming) exterior to help a friend in need. All in all, He is a "Good" dragon who Assists when needed and Works to the best of his ability.
(Still working on it! Sorry if you hate it!!!!)
Interests: Likes playing, Acting tough, and pulling pranks
Dislikes: Getting bested ,Getting embarrassed, Getting talked to like Im a little kid! And Pears, I HATE pears
Fears: Scared of the dark(secretly), Scared of betrayal, Scared of Heights(ironically), Agraphobia, Fear of
Being immobilized, Scared of being forgotten, And fear of being alone.
Height: 15 feet(Really small, not because of tribe.)
Scales: *Slight blue tint due to original birth area*/Orange and a bit of gold
Eyes: Red
Appearance: Has a necklace with all birthstones which he treasures dearly. He also carries a small dagger, along with a set of lockpicks and a map.
Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Was hatched/ Grew up in a skywing Tribe, yet Was actually born a seawing.
Rank: (For the most part)Still a hatchling
Family: (Orphaned/Parents are dead/no kin)
Mate: Too young!
Hatchlings: Also to young.
Skills and Abilities
Strengths: I'm Good at Small talk, Bargaining, running, Smarts, Good at making relationships(not in a mating way)With other tribes.
Special Abilities: Has Some attributes from his original birth place, Telepathy, Magic(To a limited extent),a "Potential power Type of thing, Various other/etc.
Weaknesses: Mental breakdowns, Seeing people get hurt, Betrayal.
Combat Style: #1/Constant movement, leaping around until the perfect opportunity to dash in and Attack my foe. #2/Being smaller allows me to toy with my opponents weight. I simply adjust myself in order to receive their attack and redirect it, making them harm themselves in the process. #3/Using various flight manuvers and magic to defeat an opresser,(Results vary)
Background
History: Was an Egg while in Seawing territory, Yet was "stolen" and "Hatched" In skywing territory and "Grew up" There. Once there, I slowly adapted to The tribe and its territory, losing what made me a seawing, like my gills/"webbed feet". Due to the climate change from the territories, I grow/age EXTREMELLY slow, so I'm still the age I Was(basically)when I came To the tribe.(Because of age, I will build on my story from there)
RP Sample :Im take roleplay very seriously, I'll be just fine.
Finely-
Posts : 1
Reputation : 0
Age : 25
Location : Frequents the various areas/tribes from time to time.
Re: Not the best oc,but it's a start.:/
I believe new people need RP samples. As for the rest, it's good, but magic needs to be explained more, and appearance as well. You put what he has for accessories, but we know nothing of the dragon's build, scale type, wing type, ect; at all.
Asailia- Seawing Citizen
- Posts : 346
Reputation : 12
Location : 'Murica
Re: Not the best oc,but it's a start.:/
Why does is new person also have a warning mark? XD
AuSurath- NightWing Hatchling
- Posts : 321
Reputation : 13
Re: Not the best oc,but it's a start.:/
Because new people are scary.
Lead-
Posts : 249
Reputation : 3
Age : 30
Location : In the shadows... waiting...
Re: Not the best oc,but it's a start.:/
At the start of your account creation you get to chose where the warning bar starts something I should probably change. Anyways couple of things.
1. Dragons aren't amazing tool users like humans are they are natural apex predators. You aren't going to have the paw dexterity to fiddle around with lockpicks. Also since you have natural claws a dagger is redundant.
2.Telepathy is power for gods not for normal dragons and even if it were for dragons it would probably be NightWing specific.(maybe could also see it being LightWings specific) also you're going to have to expand on what kind of magic you can do. A dragon of your age is hardly going to know anything. Might be able to make a small light or light a candle but nothing very useful. The same goes with your "Various other/etc" you're going to want to explain that if you want to use any of it in RP.
1. Dragons aren't amazing tool users like humans are they are natural apex predators. You aren't going to have the paw dexterity to fiddle around with lockpicks. Also since you have natural claws a dagger is redundant.
2.Telepathy is power for gods not for normal dragons and even if it were for dragons it would probably be NightWing specific.(maybe could also see it being LightWings specific) also you're going to have to expand on what kind of magic you can do. A dragon of your age is hardly going to know anything. Might be able to make a small light or light a candle but nothing very useful. The same goes with your "Various other/etc" you're going to want to explain that if you want to use any of it in RP.
Celestia- Goddess of the Moon and Stars
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Posts : 1459
Reputation : 45
Age : 29
Location : I have no idea where I am.
Re: Not the best oc,but it's a start.:/
Moved to declined. Please contact a member of staff if you would like to work on this.
Celestia- Goddess of the Moon and Stars
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Posts : 1459
Reputation : 45
Age : 29
Location : I have no idea where I am.
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