Nefarian The Rogue: Edited

Personal Info:
Name: Nefarian
Alias: The Aspect of Destruction
Age: 55 years old
Gender: Male
Personality: Nefarian is an evil dragon who seeks nothing but power. He is cunning and manipulates others to do his bidding. Nefarian loves to interfere with the lives of humans but is also keeping an eye on the tribes. His goal is to one day destroy those who oppose them and he is willing to do that no matter the cost. On a side note Nefarian does not believe in the Gods, he despises them.
Interests:  1. Power.
             2. The Destruction of Humanity and the Tribes.
             3. An army of Black Dragons.
Dislikes:  1. Weakness.
          2. The tribes with the exception of the NightWings.
          3. Humanity.
         4. Disloyalty.
Fear: The spirits who created him and his rogue father who was rumored to have possessed dark powers but is also rumored to be dead.

General Appearance:
Height: 100 feet tall
Length: 85 feet long
Scales: Triangular obsidian black scales arranged in a horizontal manner.
Eyes: Fiery Red with a yellow tint.
Appearance: This one is hard to explain. Just look at my profile pic. Nefarian as a weapon uses his massive claws. He also has a braided double beard.

Tribe Information and Status:
Tribe: He started as a NightWing egg but became a rogue when he hatched.
Rank: Rogue
Family: He never knew his family. His mother was a NightWing killed by humans. His father was a FireWing turned rogue.. Nefarian himself was raised by dark spirits.
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities:
Strengths: Mental: Nefarian is good with the manipulation of minds
            Physical: Nefarian's scales are very tough. He is also a quick flyer.
Special Abilities: The Shadowblast: A dark energy blast. It is the darkness equivalent of a fire blast attack.
Weaknesses: Nefarian is vulnerable to the same dark energy that created him.
Combat Style: No specific combat style.

Background:
History: Nefarian is a Black Wyrm roaming the world of Pyyria. Some may think he is from the NightWings because of the many black scales that cover his body and those who do are not entirely wrong though also not entirely correct. Nefarian started out as a NightWing egg. His mother decided to give birth to him in a secret location away from the tribes due to her relationship with a FireWing. All seemed well until she was attacked by a human patrol. She was weak from giving birth and the humans quickly killed her and took her 3 eggs. 1 egg though was pushed in a nearby waterfall and swept away by the current. Unfortunately for the egg, the current led into a deep cavern in the ground. The fall was tremendous bu luckily the egg remained strong and landed without any damage at the bottom of the cavern.

This cavern though seemed evil. It seemed to be a realm of darkness, a realm where light was forbidden to enter. For years to come the egg grew with the help of the darkness and the dark spirits which reigned supreme in this place. The dark spirits were able to utilize all of their magic here. This was a cave where energy roamed freely. The spirits each handed the egg their powers. Evil, unholy powers. This corrupted and mutated the egg and eventually the egg hatched into Nefarian. Nefarian possessed traits from the NightWings and additional traits from the spirits. He had a black heart. A heart which thrived on destruction, power, and cunning. The corruption also made Nefarian change in appearance as well as make him almost nearly the size of a FireWing.(See my Profile Picture for his appearance.)

Lets take a step back here and breathe.

"Nefarian's powers included the manipulation of the mind. A more powerful addition was Shadowflame. A fire blast which was so powerful that the heat would kill you before the fire even reached. He also had enormous claws. Now Nefarian roams the wilds untamed looking for followers and mates. His goal is to destroy the tribes, subjugate the NightWings, end humanity and reign supreme."

Denied. You don't have a history of being a hybrid or having parents who possessed Firewing abilities. And the heat itself is waaay too OP. Please put the ability in the "Special Abilities" field. The power itself needs to be changed.

And please keep in mind that you can't truly have power over someone's mind. Please bump this when fixed!

Okay I edited the power. When it comes to having power over someone's mind, I meant that Nefarian can persuade people to join him using his cunning. He cannot physically enter someone's mind.

(Bump)

(Bump again)

I edited my application.

PFFFF. COSSY GET YO BUTT OVA HERE! I'm sowwy this is taking so long, Deep XD Cossy's being a derp.

Its fine

Bump

Gosh O.o I thought you'd be accepted by now.


APPROVED.

Thank you my good sir

Sorry if I caused trouble.

Just putting it out there, I used to be old Warcraft player, so seeing Nefarian within Pyyria is a nice load of Nostalgia. Great to have you with us and its a pleasure xD

One little note though, your height might bring some controversy due to the size given your NightWing heritage, although truth be told with an unknown father who was a rogue you can possibly pull it off.

Thanks man. I knew someone would realize soon enough.

Since you're approved I've moved your Bio to the Approved Rogues. Enjoy the site and I look forward to Rping with you at somepoint. Need any help with your bearing at all don't hesitate to just give me, any other member of staff or even anyone on chat a shout, we'll be sure to help you out as quick as possible, haha.

Oh again, Blackwing Lair "WELCOME HEROES". Bloody brilliant xD

Thanks again . I also look forward to roleplaying with you. Maybe we can get a plot where Nefarian meets with the Nightwing Empire.


On a side note, which is your favorite Dragonflight.

Definitely, given your characters ideology and even appearance more than likely you'll come across a few NightWings. You never know you might even catch myself with some interaction when I'm on collecting alchemy supplies, haha.

Favorite Dragonflight has to be the Blacks, and the greatest one of them Neltharion. Although I believe they ruined him in the game itself, I always thought he was brilliant the way he was portrayed in the Novels such as in the war of the Ancients series and Day of the Dragon.

"A dark energy blast which hits the opponent with force and paralyzes their senses for a short period of time." How exactly would this work? You possess the element of darkness, clearly, how would this paralyze the target's senses?

Unapproved

"Mental: Nefarian is good with the manipulation and corruption of minds" Please be more specific what exactly is it that your doing.

"The dark spirits were able to utilize all of their magic here. This was a cave that even the Gods themselves did not have access to."

Absolutely not. Anything that exists was created by the gods including spirits. Any resistance to the gods is not allowed but complete immunity is just no even if its not your character specifically.

Sorry it took me a while to edit this I was busy with other things.

You removed a couple things from your special abilities but its still in your background. Might want to remove it from your background.

Alright I completely removed it from my background.

"The corruption also made Nefarian change in appearance as well as make him almost nearly the size of a FireWing."

We don't allow circumventing the dragon size rules. Though if you mention you have FireWing heritage you could keep your size. The whole idea though seems that you got bigger. The max and min sizes for dragons are consider unusual. Even at 80 you'd be considered a giant of a NightWing. Larger even than the FireWing Queen (though she is a bit short. 60 feet)

Alright I changed it so I have a FireWing heritage.

Approved ^^

Thank you!