Haneul the SkyWing

by **Haneul** Sat Apr 25, 2015 1:10 pm

Personal Info
Name: Haneul
Alias: Han
Age: 42
Gender: Male

Personality: Haneul is a very serious SkyWing. Extremely loyal to his tribe, he does little outside his tribal duties. He rarely socializes with anyone who isn't a SkyWing. Han isn't too fond of Hatchlings, as he finds them somewhat annoying. However, he would love his own Hatchlings, if he ever had any. He also doesn't like Dragons who disrespect their elders and leaders. At times, Haneul will step out of his comfort zone to help a Dragon from another tribe-- even a rogue if he has to.

Interests: Protecting his tribe, traveling the skies of Pyrria, causing damage with his breath attack.

Dislikes: Anything and everyone who could bring harm to the SkyWings. Cloudless-skies. IceWings

Fears: Ice, failing to protect his tribe.

General Appearance
Height: 40ft
Scales: Blue grey, black
Eyes: Jade green
Appearance: Hanuel, at the maximum height for a SkyWing, is the color of the clouds when it rains; a smoky blue grey. On his neck and chest, his underbelly and tail are black scales. As dark as the sky when it is choked by the ash spewed into it by a volcano. His chest and the sides of his neck are protected by larger, plated scales. The sides of his head are framed by spiked, light grey feathers. Those same feathers, mixed with a few grass-green ones, form a mane that runs from the top of his head down to the space between his wings on his back. Also adorning his head are two small gold horns and a bright red jewel in the center of his forehead. The jewel is a brilliant ruby that catches and reflects the sunlight. Haneul's wings are feathered, light tan that darken into gold only to lighten again to tan at the tips. His tail is streamline to allow for even better flight. It ends in a golden club which itself ends in a black stinger. His eyes are a piercing jade green which are particularly frightening at night, as they would be one of the first things visible.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: SkyWing
Rank: Guardian
Family: N/A
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Haneul, like all SkyWings, is a fast flyer. He excels in aerial combat. Though they are small, his horns could be used to give a Dragon a nasty scar, at least. If conditions are right--he is pinned under a larger Dragon--he could maybe puncture them. Haneul has lightning breath and can create powerful, tornado-like winds when flapping his wings fast enough. His club could cause some major damage if swung hard enough and the stinger at the end could puncture one's neck or underbelly.

Weaknesses: A breath attack from a FireWing would burn his feathers and render him unable to fly. A breath attack from an IceWing would form ice on his feathers and have the same effect. While he has plated scales on his chest and neck, the rest of his body has smooth scales, making it more susceptible to damage.

Combat Style: No particular fighting style, but he likes to use his speed to his advantage.

Background
RP Sample: Alt of Baldirak

by **Cosmos** Sat Apr 25, 2015 4:03 pm

Alright, we have a few issues here.

Your ability states that if enough sunlight/moonlight is absorbed, then a relatively powerful fire breath attack can be used. Unless you're a hybrid, fire breathing belongs in the field of Firewings. And the ability to absorb and forms of light will remain within Lightwing fields. So that part specifically is a no-no.

Keep in mind that this stinger of yours will have no poison whatsoever.

As for your personality, you have no met the minimum amount of sentences, which is 5. Please fix these things and I'll be sure to review your app again.