Vesanus Character Creation

Personal Info
Name: Vesanus
Alias: The Broken Mind
Age: Exact Age Unknown, though he appears to be in adulthood due to his size
Gender: Male
Personality: Vesanus takes great pride in being a member of the Nightwing tribe, often interested with the way that the tribe is lead. Vesanus is also known as the broken mind for a reason, that being due to what others may call his ‘insanity’. He lacks empathy for others, and the capacity to feel any emotion deeply. Vesanus generally displays respect and politeness, but in truth he is plagued by restlessness and boredom. Due to the fact that he cannot tolerate loneliness, he often sees others as objects to be used for his satisfaction. Due to his psychopathic state, Vesanus is angered far more easily than most, and his displays of anger tend to be cold and sudden, making it unpredictable as to when he would enter this state of mind. Overall, Vesanus lacks much more than empathy for others in his emotional repertoire, and due to the fact that he is incapable of experiencing deep emotion, even describing relationships as ‘hideous’. The closest to an emotional feeling that Vesanus can reach, is that of contempt. This is due to the fact that no matter how charming and friendly he may seem in his daily affairs, he feels contempt for the individuals that he fools.
Interests: Vesanus finds the politics of his tribe rather interesting.Though he doesn't personally like the idea of taking part in said affairs, he enjoys the development of his tribe, and is often curious of the ways in which the hierarchy will lead the tribe.
Being known by some as ‘The broken mind’, Vesanus tries to keep away from the public eye as often as possible. Because of this he spends numerous hours in solitude, contemplating various thoughts that pass through his mind. This has become somewhat of a hobby for Vesanus, as he uses this time to analyse the actions of other Nightwings, deeming whose who could cause problems and who, in some cases, may also be a threat to the tribe and its leaders.
Vesanus shows interest in the knowledge of other tribes beside his own. Though not for mere curiosity, rather to have a better understanding on how to defeat other tribes in combat. One of Vesanus’s personal hatreds is another tribe claiming to be more powerful than the nightwings, and as such he understands that having the information on how to dispatch his opponent in combat as effectively as possible proves to be something that pleases the monstrous nightwing.  
Dislikes: Other tribes, hatchlings and being disturbed while in the process of thought.
Fears: Vesanus does not generally show signs of fear, unable to feel this emotion due to his state of mind. The closest he would get to a 'fear' is the thought of another tribe becoming more powerful then the Nightwings.  

General Appearance
Height: Forty-three foot, without taking wingspan into account.
Scales: Dark scales cover the body of Vesanus, his underbelly lacking scales in places, revealing weaker areas of the body.
Eyes: While his right eye is a light red in colour, the left eye is absent of colour, though the pupil is still visible. A deep scar runs across the left eye.
Appearance: Although he appears to be quite weak compared to other members of his tribe, Vesanus is surprisingly quite strong. His scales are almost as dark as the night itself, running smooth over his body for the most part.He also appears to be missing scales in certain areas of his body, including his underbelly and around his wounded eye. The tip of one of the horns upon his head is cracked and easily visible. When he speaks it is also noticeable that some of his teeth on the lower right of his jaw are absent. Although he can be described as hideous, Vesanus seem to not care about his physical form.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Nightwing
Inheritance: Both Vesanus’s parents were Nightwings, making him a pure blood member of the Nightwing tribe.
Rank: Guardian
Family:  N/A (Unknown)
Mate: N/A Vesanus does not feel the emotion known as ‘love’)
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Though not the largest of Nightwings, and indeed appearing weak to some, Vesanus is surprisingly strong. Although not as physically strong as some of the larger nightwings, his strength is still above average for someone of his build. Some of what could be considered ‘Strength’ could be described as sheer brutality in the way in which vesanus fights during combat.
Special Abilities:  Due to his abnormal features and ‘broken mind’ Vesanus never developed a special ability. In fact Vesanus does not even use his racial ability, though whether this is through choice no one knows. The closest Vesanus gets to a special ability is when he is in a berserker state of mind, though this information will be displayed in the combat style.
Weaknesses: Vesanus often charges headlong into battle, not thinking the situation through, making it fairly easy for him to be outwitted.
Combat Style: One of Vesanus’s more well known attributes is that which some may call his ‘berserker state’. Due to his broken mind and lack of control over anger, combined with the threat of another dragon no matter if friend or foe, Vesanus almost appears to lose control. Simply attacking without thought, he would resort to simply biting and clawing at his enemies, often trying to impale them on his horns during an initial engagement. During this state of mind Vesanus also feels very little pain, and can continue to fight through almost impossible endeavors (However as he calms and he regains control, he will be confronted by the pain that he previously could not feel).
(Note: During Vesanus’s berserker state, damage to limbs etc will still imobalise him. For example, receiving extensive damage to his front leg in combat will cause him to stumble and often trip if standing. The berserker state simply allows him to feel no pain until after it has worn off. This does not mean that he would be able to fly if he received damage to a wing as another example. He would simply not feel the damage received, although use of broken limbs and such would clearly still limit him).
Vesanus does not use his ‘berserker state’ in all combat, and only seems to enter this state when his anger is pushed to its limit. It is also noticeable that the pupils of his eyes shrink, and he often grins sadistically during the berserker state, showing his insanity. Some may have even heard his sinister laughs during combat.
(Note: Due to the Berserker stance I chose not to have the Racial ability, or any form of ‘Special ability’ as I did not want my character to become to OP).

Background
History: Vesanus obtained both his physical and mental obscurities when he was but a hatchling through a raid on his nest by what were know as ‘humans’. Vesanus has been the runt, and as such had been pushed  behind his parents out of harm's way towards the back of the cave that was his home. Vesanus had watched as his father was the first to be brought down, followed shortly by his mother.

One of the earliest of Vesanus’s memories was the sound of his brother and sister, the two other hatchlings, screaming in pain as they were shown no mercy. Vesanus cowered at the back of the cave, not understanding what was happening. The only thing that burnt in his mind was revenge. Letting out what would be a pitiful roar due to his size, Vesanus charged out of the shadows, and latched onto the fleshy leg of the first ‘human’ he saw. The creature roared in pain as it fell, though it wasn't long until it's accomplishes joined their injured companion.

Vesanus attempted to turn from the first human, towards one that was now on his right, though the humans had strategically cornered the young whelp. One of the humans swung with a spear that caught Vesanus on his underbelly as he attempted to roll out of the way, tearing some of the scales free and cutting into flesh. Vesanus roared in pain, distracted as the humans moved closer. The one on the right waited for the correct moment and lunged forward, plunging a short sword into the right side of Vesanus’s maw, tearing through both scale and flesh alike, leaving part of the whelps lower jaw open in a monstrous sight. His teeth could be seen without the outer wall of scale and flesh to shield it.

Vesnaus lost control from the pain, clawing, biting, scratching at anything he could. He felt his teeth and talons, small though they may be, tearing into the fleshy skin of the humans who screamed in pain as he had done so only moments before. Vesanus almost felt pride, he would avenge his family! Yet his overconfidence would be his downfall. He heard a bone like crunch as he felt one of his horns connect with the steel of a spear. Without thinking Vesnaus turned to tear into this human as well. But this one was ready.

As Vesanus turned, he felt a shooting pain above his left eye, confused for a moment as he felt the pain slowly ride down his face. Too late had he realised that a blade had been placed above his left eye and dragged downward, through the nightwings eye and even into some of the scales underneath, instantly blinding him. Vesnaus fell to the ground, and rolled onto his side, defeated. He smirked to himself crazily as he heard the humans cheering, coming closer to him. He closed his remaining eye and awaiting his fate.

The hatchling must have fallen unconscious, but to his own surprise he awoke in the same cave, surrounded by corpses of the humans. Vesanus tried to get to his feet until he felt a large talon gently plant itself on the side of his head. Vesanus was afraid for a short while, until he looked upward, and gazed directly into the reassuring blue eyes of another Nightwing that spoke in both a friendly yet commanding tone;

“Rest now young one, there is no need to be afraid. My name is Tenebris. I’m here to help”.

Hi, and welcome to the forum ^^ You're Tenebris's friend, right?

The card is approved. ^^

I think Tenebris has already talked you about this, but we have subsocieties ^^

You can decide to join between Neutral, Evil or Chaotic NightWings. There're also the Good NightWings, but the topic isn't up yet.

https://rpgdragons.forumotion.com/t1762-sub-society-neutral-nightwings

https://rpgdragons.forumotion.com/t1749-sub-society-evil-nightwings

https://rpgdragons.forumotion.com/t1755-sub-society-chaotic-nightwings

Thanks for the warm welcome and Indeed I am Tenebris's friend.

Thanks for the approval and I completely forgot about the sub-societies, my apologies. Ill edit it now.

Edited so that Sub-society is now included in my information and can be found under the tribe information.

Edit: Included some background for my character (Only took over a year).

Hello Vesanus! I noticed too you app is a little old, so lets update it up to speed!

For interests, you have 1, we require three. So maybe things like NW History or something if you still want to keep the general idea of liking NW only.

The sub-society thing has been removed, so that can be deleted. Maybe replace it with Inheritance (Like what percent of each tribe they are, like 100%NW, or 25%SkW and 75% NW)

For strengths, say something like how physically strong you are. Just to flesh out the app more ^^

For special abilities (or combat style for you) "During this state of mind Vesanus also feels very little pain, and can continue to fight through almost impossible endeavors"
What are these endeavors? Just pain ignorance, or more? And this is silly, but I just gotta ask for clarification. If he is hurt badly to where a limb won't work, this rage state won't magically make it work, right? Just make it so he doesn't feel the pain of it and fights without it?

Everything looks good, just a little updating to current standards and specification. Bump when ready, and you only require one approval as it is an update.

Edit:

- More interests added to bring the total to three.
- Sub Society information replaced with Inheritance
- More in depth information added on Strengths paragraph.
- Note added under special ability to better explain berserker state limitations

~Reapproved~