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Crystallis- Posts : 59
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Nice! I really like it! You're more than welcome to join the Seawings, even if it isn't official. I'm Shiningwater, the Seawing Healer and mate to the king, but you can call me Shine.
I also have another account-MoonShade- and I think you'd get along well with her. It sounds like you both have a "berserk" mode (if I can call it that...). Generally, I think you'll fit in quite well, and I hope to see you around!
I also have another account-MoonShade- and I think you'd get along well with her. It sounds like you both have a "berserk" mode (if I can call it that...). Generally, I think you'll fit in quite well, and I hope to see you around!
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Good to know! I look forward to interacting with the rest of the cast and seeing what all interesting messes situations we'll get into. Who knows... quite possibly the two of our characters could meet up, sometime.
Crystallis- Posts : 59
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What was this doing in the approved area. First off you must specify a height.
"Originating from a multidimensional universe, Crystallis' egg was created by divine power with the intention of establishing harmony and reason. It was successful for the most part. The first few years of her life, however, consisted of a series of ups and downs: invasion, traveling, dragon hunters, unexpected friendship, loss... over which she finally discovered and accepted her role in the worlds. And, after solving most of her remaining problems, she was gifted the mysterious privilege to warp through space. Ever since then, she had been wandering around the universe, taking full advantage of this honor and delving into worlds like her own.
One such world, and currently her favorite, is this very one: Pyyria. Ever since warping to the kingdoms, Crystal has spent most of her time exploring, learning, and serving the dragon tribes, particularly the SeaWings. From there she was eventually accepted as their ally, coming and going from their kingdom with an exchange of supplies and information."
History is just no. All dragons should be born on Pyyria and certainly not form another dimension.
"Located in the upper part of her gums are venom sacks, allowing for a mild poisonous bite."
Venom is unique to EarthWings please remove this.
"However, her most valuable ability is being able to transform into other creatures at will and speak to them in their own tongue, though she prefers to stay in dragon form."
Remove this totally.
Your going to have to completely redo this character.
"Originating from a multidimensional universe, Crystallis' egg was created by divine power with the intention of establishing harmony and reason. It was successful for the most part. The first few years of her life, however, consisted of a series of ups and downs: invasion, traveling, dragon hunters, unexpected friendship, loss... over which she finally discovered and accepted her role in the worlds. And, after solving most of her remaining problems, she was gifted the mysterious privilege to warp through space. Ever since then, she had been wandering around the universe, taking full advantage of this honor and delving into worlds like her own.
One such world, and currently her favorite, is this very one: Pyyria. Ever since warping to the kingdoms, Crystal has spent most of her time exploring, learning, and serving the dragon tribes, particularly the SeaWings. From there she was eventually accepted as their ally, coming and going from their kingdom with an exchange of supplies and information."
History is just no. All dragons should be born on Pyyria and certainly not form another dimension.
"Located in the upper part of her gums are venom sacks, allowing for a mild poisonous bite."
Venom is unique to EarthWings please remove this.
"However, her most valuable ability is being able to transform into other creatures at will and speak to them in their own tongue, though she prefers to stay in dragon form."
Remove this totally.
Your going to have to completely redo this character.
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Ahem, i have a character named Crystal. I think it would be nice of you to think of another name, because i feel like people will get confused. Thanks for reading.
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