Toxin the outsider

Personal info                                                                          

Name: Toxin
Nickname : Tox
Age : 18
Gender : Male
sexuality: pansexual
Personality: Toxin is a closed off and shy dragon, curious but careful. He tends to keep to himself unless he needs to be around others. Slow to trust but once a bond has been formed he is a dedicated and loyal friend. He has a good sense of humor with things but prefers to get the facts. Once he’s found friends and relaxed he is a happy and energetic.
Interests: bugs, things smaller then him, unknown things, older dragons, flying, rain, water
Dislikes: Loud sounds, large groups, sunlight
Fears: betrayal, pain, the cold, never ending day, his own acid killing him
Weaknesses: Thanks to growing up alone, he does have trust issues and it will take time for anyone to gain his trust, once that trust has been given he will be loyal to the end.

Appearance

Height: only about twenty one feet from feet to head, about fifteen feet from the tip of his nose to his tail
Scales: Black scales covering body with lighter gray scales along the belly. Light green scales around the eyes and mouth.
Eyes: a solid neon green with no pupal
Appearance: wyvern body structure with strong back legs and large wings and no front limbs. Hook/finger like projections on the ark of the wing act like limbs when on the ground. A row of spines down his spine start behind the crest of horns on his head and end at the barb on the end of his tail. A small crest of horns around the back of the head with frilled fin like ears. Wings are large and bat like with a translucent greenish membrane between the solid black spines of the wing.
Special future: when his mouth opens, glowing organs in the inside of his cheek light up his mouth a neon green, the same color as his eyes. This is on his own control and not a reflex.

Tribe information
Tribe: was not born into one
Inheritance: 50% Earth wing and 50% Night wing
Rank: Rogue
Family: a Night wing father and Earth wing mother, unknown to him whom. Hatched alone and razed himself.
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and abilities

Strengths: thanks to large wings he will be a fast flyer, about 70 km/h. Stealth will be a honed skill with time. Strong night vision inherited from father.

Weaknesses: light from the sun or fire makes it hard for him to see making him exposed during the day. Black scales make him stand out in an open area or in a snowy area. Glowing eyes gives him away in the night.

Skills: thanks to his night wing father he is a master at stealth but his real gift comes from the acid that he can create. The acid has become his name sake. It is held low in his throat in a sack that when he needs it, he can contract to let out a spray of acid, with a different contraction he can make this liquid into a mist. On organic tissue it begins to sting in small quantities and can melt tissue in large quantities.
On inorganic things like rocks it will sizzle but it can’t melt though.  It’s only effective on living tissue. Thick scales will hold up longer to the spray then thin scales or skin. After he empties this sack he must wait for it to be refilled so this weapon is only used when he has to defend himself. It takes about five hours for a full refill and three for a half refill. His back claws are sharp so in an air fight he will try to get above his target and bring them down using his claws. As for stealth, his black scales allow him to blend in well with dark surroundings; night vision lets him spot pray from further away. At this young age he can’t fly as quietly as he hopes but with age and time will come quieter flight.
Weaknesses: being a poor fighter in the day leaves him exposed to being attacked during the day. His scales can withstand some heat and some damage to claws but are not thick enough to save him from a direct shot of fire or sharp blades or claws. He can be hurt by the venom or toxins of anothet dragon but is immun to his own. With no front limbs he can’t swim very well, his wings are too big and too clumsy to aid him with swimming.

Fighting style: he prefers not to use his acid unless he has to so for the most part he uses his stealth to sneak up on his pray and use his back legs, claws and teeth to do damage. His wings sometimes are used to bat or push away an attacker but he will try to defend them since he needs them to fly.

History
Born from an unknown earth wing and night wing, his egg was left near heat vents in the fire wing lands. 50% from each parent. Hatching all on his own he learned fast how to survive. His acid spray saving his life enough that he named himself Toxin as homage to something that saved his life. Living as a rogue he has no idea of the different clans and will avoid most dragons all the same.
Rp sample:
Toxin glides over the trees under the moon lit sky, looking for something to fill his stomach in this time of need and hunger. His eyes scanning the tree tops as he lazily glides, trying to use as little energy as possible. His pray may be blow the trees but the ground is a place of rouge dragons like himself who may also hunger for the fresh meet of a kill.

Okay so first, your current height is too small for your age. You need to either make him younger or taller.

Second, strengths and weaknesses should go in the personal info section of the app as they cover personality and mental strengths/weaknesses. Strengths and weaknesses regarding your abilities should be included in the skills and abilities section.

Now I noticed you are a SeaWing/NightWing hybrid, but what percentage of each species are you? This will help determine how strong your abilities are. Also, acid is an EarthWing ability, so unless you have EarthWing heritage, you can't have it.

Finally, you need a bit more detail with some of your abilities. How fast can he fly? He is a master at stealth? How so?

If you have any questions, just ask.

How tall and long should a dragon of 18 be? i can fix the rest so it works but i'm still on the fence about height.

Hm, maybe about 20ft.

Okay that works, i changes his parents to night and earth to clear up his powers, gave him a flight speed of about 70 km/h and included some things about his skills. Otherwise i believe i have the template as it has been shown.

Because he is half EarthWing you need to mention for one of your weaknesses that you are not immune to acid or toxins. And how long does it take for his acid sack to refill? Finally, you have his rank as Trainee, but in Tribe you have that he was not born into one. If he is a Rogue, then he does not have a rank.

I belive I fixed what you have pointed out. A five hour recovery time should provide plenty of exposed time after he has attacked

Actually, you can be immune to your own acid, just not to others. But if you want to keep it that way, that's fine. Otherwise...

Approved

Would you like your username changed to your character name?

Yes please, I would appreciate that.