Dyneth

Personal Info:
Name: Dyneth, ???
Age: ??? (She looks and acts young)
Gender: Female
Interests: Playing games, Adventuring
Dislikes: Fighting
Personality: She is an... interesting one, to say the least. First off, for whatever reason, be it psychological or physical, she does not speak, though she certainly has the intelligence for it. She gets excited and/or sidetracked quite easily. She also has quite a number of strange habits, like "cooking"(charring, really) her food over a fire, then fashioning a fork out of an adequate nearby branch and using it as a fork. Her main interest, however, lies in getting to what can only be assumed Home. This endavour is often interrupted by her easily sidetracked nature though. Generally, she is playful and coy, but can get quite feisty if adequately provoked... until she realises that this would lead to fighting...
Fears: Nothing stands out in particular, but as I said, she is not the daring adventurer type.

Appearance:
Length: 8 Meters (~50 Bananas)
Scales: Glorious purple
Eyes: More redish Glorious purple
Appearance: Magnificent and Majestic. Refer to the provided illustration for more. Colouration, appearance, and (to be observed) abilities suggest a mixed Firewing-Seawing origin.(just imagine the SW ancestry on it.)

Tribe Information and Status:
Tribe: Rogue, for lack of a better category.
Rank: N/A
Family: ???
Mate: ???
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities:
Most prominently, she has kind of semi-opposable thumbs. It is not perfect and inconvenient to use, but she is more than capable of using simpler things like sword/tool handles with it.
Secondly, she has a firebreath ability, most likely the courtesy of Firewing heritage

Don't look in here if you want to take part in the plot:

Combat Style:
She employs ancient martial arts techniques in her battles. Her favourite move is "Distract your opponent and run for the hills!"

Background: That is exactly what the plot is meant to uncover.

Uhm.... Bump?
May i have a staff member review this?

I'm not an admin or mod, but you did not follow the template: http://www.rpgdragons.org/t100-create-your-dragon-template

I'd follow the template, as some this are missing and some don't meet the number requirements.

I am aware. The tribe, rank, etc information is missing because it is unknown. As is said in the background, stuff like these is what the future plot(currently with interest only from Baldi) is meant to uncover. I did not write them down because that would pretty much eliminate all need for the plot in the first place.

And what part did not meet the number requirements? if it is the size, it should be at the lower end of the SW scale if i translated the barbaric imperial system to the more civilised metric one correctly.

I doubt the staff would accept this though, part of the plot or not, the things you are missing are in fact very well required. The Background is fine to leave, but you are missing the role-play sample, your personality is fine and your name might be too, but honestly, everything else would not really be acceptable at all. Edit all for these things and fill them out properly.

*Nick Fury voice* Kid, this ain't my first rodeo...
(I hope someone gets that reference or i will look rather... arrogant, i guess?)
Now, roleplay sample: I believe the stuff ive done with my other 2 characters so far was enough of a sample. If not(and told so), i guess ill just use the future opening post of the topic as sample.
Name: whats wrong with it? Her name is Dyneth. her title is unknown, if any, hence the ???
Age: I'll take a wild guess and assume from her behaviour and physique(that spelled right?) that she should be somewhere between hatchling and young adult age.
As for the tribe and related infos: She has no idea what tribes are, hence she has no rank whatsoever.
She has no hatchlings.
The spoiler ability is absolutely incapable of affecting anything other than herself, directly, or indirectly. It is purely there for plot reasons. Hell, it would probably get her killed if used at the wrong time or place.

So... what exactly is your problem with what? O.o
I admit, keeping the ability secret is stretching it, but until actual staff does not ask for it, i dont intend to just go ahead and give Baldi the key to the entire plot.

For the sake of clarity you'll still have to precise she's a Rogue with no rank ^^
I fear you'll have to precise that secret power of yours, though. If you trust Baldi will not look it up, you can put it in a spoiler tag so it isn't seen at the first glance. Otherwise, I guess you could PM it to me, but it would be preferable to keep a trace of it on the character sheet...

You are still missing complete areas. Read the template, that's why its there silly

.....Are you a bureaucrat?
I see only 3 things that are "missing", other than ones already adressed: Aliases. If none are listed, is it not logical to assume that she has none?
Strengths: Its there. I just did not spell it out. Opposable thumbs?
Weaknesses: admittedly, that one could be considered missing, but i would say not being able/willing to speak is quite a weakness in pretty much any situation.
Now then, on to do the edits i promised for Hyruu

(Not a staff member) You have to put at least three dislikes and likes.

Hey stop stealing my job >< Though it's right that I missed that, you need to put in a weakness. Doesn't need to be a really important one considering your powers though.

Why does this app draw so much attention?! XD
Ill think stuff up tomorrow for those three... Hell, ill have to watch the new star wars for 12 hours so ill have time and boredom to do it...

And yeah, i also thought that there isn't much to balance out on her that would warrant some serious weakness