Rafej the Venomous

by **Rafej** Wed Jun 17, 2015 1:37 pm

Personal Info
Name: Rafej
Alias: Raf; Rafy; Rafiki; Raj;
Age: 7 years
Gender: Male
Personality: Rafej is a strong yet prideful dragon. He likes to be around other dragons and has a well-rounded personality. He's a great fighter and likes to tell stories of his adventures to hatchlings. He does boast sometimes, but he isn't very arrogant. Rafej doesn't like to be offended and hates when people lie to him.
Interests: Rafej likes water, flying, and throwing rock-balls. (ouo)
Dislikes: Rafej hates dragons that lie to him. He dislikes things that are larger than he is and when he breaks a claw or looses a tooth.
Fears: Rafej's fear is that his fang that can produce venom (read Combat Style) will break.

General Appearance
Height: 12.7 feet
Scales: Brown with a goldenish tint and lighter underbelly, teardrop-shaped and smooth, all going in the same direction.
Eyes: Left eye leaf-green and right eye amber.
Appearance: Rafej is a brownish goldenish male Earth Dragon. He has a few spikes about his head and a few on his tail. He has one fang that juts out on the right side of his face that can produce venom. He is tall and battle-scared and has long, piercing claws.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: None yet but Earthwings when NPC parents can come in.
Rank: N/A
Family: N/A
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Rafej is a good fighter and a quick thinker. His sharp claws and venom-productive fang help him fight well and he is great at coming up with plans.
Special Abilities: Rafej has a fang that juts out on the right side of his mouth that can do a queer thing - produce venom. If he has the chance in battle, he will bite his enemy, puncturing through the skin and injecting venom into his foe's body. It isn't the worst venom - it wouldn't kill you, but you would still suffer. If you get bitten around three to four times you could suffer greatly. Otherwise you should heal in a few days.
Weaknesses: Dragons taller than him. If Rafej ever saw a larger dragon that wasn't on his side, he would probably flee. The skin on Rafej's tail is also very thin, which is why it is the most damaged part of his body. It can be bitten through easily and has more than one clawmark.
Combat Style: Rafej will trick his foes. He usually creeps up on them, gives them a scar or two, then darts away, and keeps at it until he gets a good grip and can inject his venom.

Background
History: I don't have anything yet, I may update if something comes to mind though.
RP Sample: Rafej flew through the sky, his wings beating against the white cotton clouds. He could feel the breeze running through his scales as he whizzed around the sky. He let out a loud, deep trill of joy as a few of his friends joined him. Rafej looked down and saw a shining lake beneath him. He swooped down low enough so that his claws could glide through the water, leaving a rippling trail behind him. Then, Rafej swooped back up to join his friends to continue their flight.

by **Arkhor** Wed Jun 17, 2015 2:06 pm

Looking good so far though could you explain the venom more, also I would think of another weakness.

Oh also your height is massive for a 2 y/o XD I would suggest like 20-30ft for a 2 y/o for an EW.