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   Personal Info
   Name: Rii   (spoken like Ree)
   Alias: Semi Goddess of land, fertility, and blacksmiths
   Age: 38 years old
   Gender: female
   Personality: With a pure neutral alignment, Rii does not care for dragons with a good nature any more than she does the bad ones. She is mostly out for herself and those she considers allies. Rii is vain and will keep her appearance looking as beautiful as it always is. These two facts show that she is a relatively proud animal. However, she does not consider herself higher than others, taking on the idea that everyone is equal; and will understand and accept when she must bow her head to some higher power. At first she may be cautious of new dragons, and reasonably so for a female who doesn't want to die or become maimed by some other dragon. However if you show signs of friendliness or neutrality she will likely do the same.
   Rii is also prone to seeking out companionship. She will deny this is though if it is brought up in conversation, but the female is very lonely. Normally she keeps away from others trying not to get in the way of possibly territorial dragons.
   On the note of protecting things, Rii has a certain object that she carries with her everywhere. She is very protective of it and will not let any other dragon touch the thing. Perhaps you can find out what this item is while RPing with her? She is not normally protective of anything else though. Food of course she will protect if prey is scarce since she doesn't want to starve and die. Rii is also highly protective of any children under her wing, as well as her own blood children.
   Interests: Rii likes to crawl and walk around the forests. Doing this keeps her calm and collected as well as supplying the she dragon with prey to hunt. Fishing is another interest that she actively performs around lakes, rivers, oceans, and streams. She also likes to play and joke around, but again since she stays away from other dragons Rii will not likely show this interest off until she trusts you. Her last most important interest would be that Rii likes to collect odd things. Unlike any rock or stamp collection, Rii will pick up anything that catches her interest and bring it to her big collection of things.
   Dislikes: Rii does not like eagles, owls, and pretty much any other non dragon predator flying through the skies. She will go after and kill whatever may go hunting after the same prey she eats. The female also does not like lightning storms as she fears that they might injure or kill her. Storms also keep the she dragon from finding food or traveling, and to a dragon who has traveled most of her life; Rii does not want to be stopped dead in her tracks for a prolonged period of time due to a bad storm. One final thing Rii dislikes is rudeness from other dragons. If she has not warranted such rudeness from a stranger Rii will be highly offended. Depending on the dragons size and strength she may act very rudely back to them. She also dislikes the cold, though it takes below negative 40 degree F weather to actually chill her because of her firewing heritage. She can easily keep herself warm in temperatures above -40.
   Fears: Fear of thunderstorms. She also has a fear of swimming too deep into the water and not being able to get to the surface for breath. However, this last fear is something she faces often in order to fish and hunt. All mortal beings fear death, and so does she. Rii has also gained a fear of torture after receiving this from the nightwings. The last fear she has is that all of those closest to her will die and leave her alone.

   General Appearance
   Height: 60 and a half feet measuring from toes to head. To her shoulder Rii is only 35 and a quarter feet tall. Rii may still grow as she ages since most dragons continue growing till they are 200-250 years of age.
  Length: Total body length is 232 feet long. Wings are 165 foot long but not added into her total body length. Rii may still grow as she ages since most dragons continue growing till they are 200-250 years of age.
   Scales: Where scales do shine through her metallic looking fur/hair they shine a deep blue. However her scales are highly iridescent and will reflect metallic green even in dim light.
   Eyes: Her eyes are a shimmering shade of blue that is a tad lighter in color than her scales. The pupils are rounded.
   Appearance: Having come from nothing Rii does not garner any fancy weapons or armor. She carries only her interesting little object. (which people will find out upon RPing with her, it's nothing fancy but part of a dead animal) The she dragons physical appearance is long and slender kind of like the oriental dragons of old. However her neck, tail, and head will be the most slender areas of her body. Rii's shoulders, chest, and legs are a bit more bulky, but not so much so as to destroy the slenderness of her form.
 Rii's claws resemble that of a bird of prey. She has three long front claws and the one long back claw on each of her four legs. Her legs are just long enough to allow the dragon to gallop over the earth if she must, though she will lack in speed while traveling this way.
 Her muzzle will be covered in thick shiny fur that glistens much like her iridescent scales do. Every hair shows off that blue base color with the green ticking on the ends of it. This short cloaking of fur covers from her head and chin down the center of her back. The hairs along her spine are much thicker and longer than those in other areas.
 Each of her wings are nearly as long as the length of her body. They flatten neatly upon her sides when not in use. Short fur runs along the outer edges of her wings till it reaches her wrists. However, the fur on her wings is sparsely covering those edges, and the scales underneath can be seen very easily.
 Lastly Rii's tail is much like the rest of her body. It is covered in those iridescent scales. A line of short fur follows along her back bone down along her tail as well. That fur thickens near the pointed end of her tail and hides a number of rather sharp looking spikes that can regrow should they break from view of would be enemies.

   Tribe Information and Status
   Tribe: Earthwing
   Rank: Semi god, vulcan, and healer
   Family: She has denounced her family name.
   On site:
              Rye- older full brother
              Mairii- younger full sister (deceased)
              Firewing and Earthwing parents

   Mate: N/A
 Current Lover(s): N/A
  Former Lover(s): Slychotic, Dynamic Oreo, Rhune
 Love Interest(s): Adair, Ragnarock, Baldirak Sapiens Draco, Rock, Rahnma
   Hatchlings:
             Sons: Umbra, Khusavir, and AuSurath (adopted)
             Daughters: Prasi, Kayle, and Ashlyn (adopted)

   Skills and Abilities
   Strengths: Mentally Rii is good at working calmly under stressful situations. She lacks the smarts to manipulate other dragons, but she is generally sly enough to understand when other dragons are trying to use or trick her. She is also very agile, being able to turn completely around in a second while flying. This may be due to her slender form and great flexibility. She can dig tunnels and melt rocks and minerals with her flames.
   Special Abilities: The multiple links in this section are to show actual tribe dragons in the earthwings and for one firewing and so that you can reference why Rii has the strength of the abilities she has.

Venom-(Note that this is also a pre-approved ability from when she was first joined) Much like a venomous snake does, Rii has venom glands. She can bite into prey and give them a near lethal injection of her venom. It takes effect in only 30 seconds paralyzing her large prey like horses, elk, or deer.
    For other dragons, should she be able to bite through their scales or armor, her venom would be able to slowly paralyze them roughly after a span of thirty seconds to fifteen minutes depending on the size of the dragon. For large dragons it takes 15 minutes to work, then for mid-sized dragons it will take 5-10 minutes before her venom starts working, for smaller dragons it takes only 1-5 minutes. The smallest of dragons however will become paralyzed after only 30 seconds post injection. To clarify the paralyses further, it will not have your dragon writhing on the ground. That only happens to lesser beings, as in her prey items. Your dragon will only have slowed movements. Think of your dragons normal speed in flight or on the ground, then cut that speed by three quarters. Your dragon will be able to move but not to the fullest extent of its abilities. It won't kill the opposing dragon, but it will give Rii enough time to escape an attacker. She will occasionally coat her hidden tail spikes in this venom if she knows she may be heading into hostile territory. If you are bitten by Rii, her venom keeps you paralyzed for about 5 minutes if you're a larger dragon before slowly beginning to wear off. For medium sized dragons it will begin to wear off around 7 minutes, and for the smallest dragons it takes roughly 10 minutes. The affected prey item or dragon will likely feel the need to puke as their muscles unclench from being paralyzed.

Empathy-Ability to read or sense the emotions or feelings of others. Yes she could even sense the emotions of higher gods too, but she cannot control or change the emotions and feelings of others. She does not have mind control, nor does she have the ability to know what the dragon she is sensing is thinking. For example: Dragon one is angry and thinking of attacking Rii's left flank. Rii can sense that this dragon is angry but cannot tell what else is going to happen. She can only tell what they are feeling.

Incubate- The ability to speed up the growth of seeds, fungi, molds, and plants. Rii cannot make these seeds, therefore they must be present in the area around her when she uses this power for it to work. Any seed or spore from any plant or fungus will grow rapidly under the influence of Rii's power. To be more descriptive, she cannot control where the plants grow or how they grow, she only allows them to grow at a much faster rate. Although I guess if she physically digs up a seed and puts it elsewhere that could be considered influencing where it will grow. However she still cannot make it grow in an unnatural way (like making a tree form into a house or something strange.) Like, if she was standing in a crop field that was just planted with new seeds, she could make those seeds grow into mature plants within two minutes.

Fertility- The ability to make plants and animals more fertile. Mostly this is used in conjunction with the incubate ability when growing plants. With plants and fungus it allows them to grow more reproductive seeds and produce more spores or pollen. Beware any humans, reptilians, or dragons walking around in the vicinity where Rii might be using this ability on plants, for the allergies that come naturally with pollen will be horrible. This ability also allows animals to become more fertile for a short period of time. Normally if this ability is gifted onto another dragon or animal it will make them go into season, allow males to produce more reproductive cells, and allows females to produce more eggs. This ability only works on physically mature plants and animals, so young organisms won't be affected by it. Rii can only use this ability on organisms within one hundred feet of her, and it lasts for three months time on both males and females, or until the female gets pregnant.

Infertility- The ability to make plants and animals infertile for a short period of time. Normally if this ability has been placed onto another dragon, plant, or animal it will make them infertile by decreasing the males reproductive cells to zero, making females stop producing eggs, and making them come out of season if they were previously in heat. Rii can only use this ability on organisms within one hundred feet of her, and it lasts for three months time. This ability does not affect young organisms unable to breed yet.

Fertility/Infertility seal- The ability to place her own personal seal on particular statues or other non living things then charge her powers into the object with the seal. The object will then give off whichever power she had placed within it to anyone within one hundred feet of it. So if Rii places her fertility power on something with this seal it will make things more fertile within one hundred feet of it. The same goes for her infertility power, and her incubate power. HOWEVER, unlike when Rii casts the powers herself these seals will only last for six months before the power inside them is depleted. So anyone who has a fertility statue will have to get it "blessed" once more by Rii to make it work again after six months is over.

Fungusamongus- This ability is much like Lespernii's ability to grow and shape plants, however with Rii it only focuses on molds and fungi. She can grow all of the many species of molds and fungi wherever and whenever she pleases. It takes very little energy to grow these and a part from using them on patients for their varying medicinal qualities Rii can't use them for much of anything else. Though she can make super sized fungi and molds. Like tree sized mushrooms and all if she wanted to.  XD

Earth and stone manipulation- Much like Neltharion's abilities Rii will now be able to control earth; sand, stone, metal, rock, lava, dirt, and other minerals. Unlike Neltharion, her lava is generally hotter than most earthwings who can use lava, but it is still a bit cooler than a firewings above average temperature flames. Like Rhune, Rii can shape earth, rocks, and minerals with only her claws and powers. However she can only control the earth in about a half mile radius around herself. Anything farther than that and she can't control it. Though she could certainly throw these objects farther than half a mile. Rii can throw earth related things with her power about a mile and a half away. However unlike Neltharion she can use this power to cover herself in stone, lava, or whatever earth related thing as if it were armor. However the longer she wears the objects like armor the more of her energy is used up keeping it attached to her body instead of allowing it to fall off. She can keep herself covered in lava, earth, rocks, and things for only thirty minutes at most before her energy runs out and she must release her power to regenerate her energy. She can regenerate energy by sleeping and eating.

If a full or semi god purely of earth were to fight against Rii her powers wouldn't do anything to them either. Depending on their abilities her powers might be null and void unable to work at all if the full or semi god of earth was using the earth around her. A full and semi god of fire would also be able to make her lava and fire attacks not work at all. For example Flames the semi god of fire and lava uses hotter lava than Rii's. His lava abilities would affect her own if they were in the same battle, taking over her lava if he spits, breathes, or throws his lava where her own lava is. Of course she could make more, but effectively her lava abilities are useless against him, and any other firewing who can withstand those temperatures. Normal water, ice using dragons, and fire wielding dragons would be the most effective in thwarting Rii's earthen attacks. As enough ice could cool her lava enough that it would turn into rock again. The same could be said for water based attacks on her lava. Most fire wielding dragons can reach the temperatures of her lava with their own fire, thus logically Rii's lava is useless on them. They might even enjoy a bath in her lava.

Fire/Blue fire- (Note that this ability was already pre-approved when she first joined before being made a semi)
Then there is that regular dragon ability where she can breath fire. Much like Vilkas and many other firewing earthwing hybrids Rii can breath fire. Her flames are a cool yellow, orange, and red; however if she chooses to waste her venom Rii can apply it like a spray to her flame. Her venom flame will not poison or paralyze because the venom is burnt off by the flames, but it does increase the strength of the flame. While using venom her cool yellowy, orange, and red flames turn to scorching blue flames. However she can only use this blue flame for a matter of 5 seconds before her venom is depleted. Her venom regenerates fastest after she eats, but normally it refills after use in about a days time. She has about ten uses of her venom while biting or coating her tail spikes before it must be refilled.

   Weaknesses: Water is a huge weakness to her now. With enough of it her flames can be put out and her earth abilities eroded away. Though it would take more time for the water to effect her earth powers compared to her fire ones. These weaknesses are better explained below when looking at the weaknesses of her certain abilities.

Lightning is a somewhat bothersome one. Should another dragon be able to wield this power she could be felled rather quickly should she not have herself shielded before hand. All of her powers can be destroyed or burned by lightning spare for her power over lava and certain rocks that resist electricity. However it takes her time to make the armor of lava or rocks over herself; about one minute, and her armor only lasts thirty minutes. So a lightning using skywing or skywing hybrid would have plenty of chances to go after her with how fast they are compared to large bumbling Rii. All they would need is the stamina to outlast her.

In her normal form Rii does not have a lot of defenses. Her scales are not very useful against powerful dragons, though they keep arrows at bay. Strong two-handed steel swords, pikes, and lances can get through her hide as well as dragon claws.

Her fertility and infertility powers don't do anything to dragons during a fight, and would not help Rii at all if she were to accidentally use these powers (because they are so new to her) while fighting. Incubate might help her block dragons or protect things if the plants are in the right places, but they could easily be destroyed by lightwing, fire, flooding, and high powered shadow or light attacks. Pretty much everything will destroy a tree given enough power and force is behind it. Trees are like the hardest plants and they can be destroyed very easily by any dragon unless you are the tiniest of skywings against a behemoth redwood or just a huge tree in general.

Her fungusamongus power can also be easily dealt with by any tribe. Since mushrooms and molds are much softer than tree bark and wood they can be cut up by all dragons of all sizes, although funnily enough a number of species of mushrooms are resistant to extreme heat or cold, and even when carried off by wind or water they can replant themselves wherever they are left as long as they are still whole and intact. Physical attacks would destroy any mushrooms or molds she creates very easily, and makes this ability pretty unusable in battle. ANY lightwing powers will destroy molds and fungi made by Rii immediately, while nightwing powers will not work at all on the fungi or molds since they grow best in their territory along side nightwing dragons. Although again, physical attacks by nightwings will destroy these fungi and molds extremely quickly and easily. Even a hatchling could destroy them that's how weak their defenses are.

If a full or semi god purely of earth were to fight against Rii her powers wouldn't do anything to them either. Depending on their abilities her powers might be null and void unable to work at all if the full or semi god of earth was using the earth around her. A full and semi god of fire would also be able to make her lava and fire attacks not work at all. For example Flames the semi god of fire and lava uses hotter lava than Rii's. His lava making abilities would affect her own if they were in the same battle, taking over her lava if he makes his own lava right on top of where her own lava is. Of course she could make more, but effectively her lava abilities are useless against him, and any other firewing who can withstand those temperatures. Normal water, ice using dragons, and fire wielding dragons would be the most effective in thwarting Rii's earthen attacks. As enough ice could cool her lava enough that it would turn into rock again. The same could be said for water based attacks on her lava. Most fire wielding dragons can reach the temperatures of her lava with their own fire, thus logically Rii's lava is useless on them. They might even enjoy a bath in her lava; plus firewings can burn right through her plant and fungi making abilities.

Another big weakness would be her loneliness. By seeking companionship from others she may put herself in situations where danger is very close. If per chance she is not keeping her body movements in check, she might knot herself around something unintentionally. However this is very rare and only happens if she is not calm and when she is overwhelmed with many things at once.
 She is has no resistance to acid whatsoever.  

   Combat Style: As mentioned above Rii will use her venom if necessary, though it takes time and energy to refill her glands once she's out of it. Her tail spikes are well used when fighting along with her sharp claws and teeth. Her special blue flames are reserved for when she's really in trouble, as it drains her venom very quickly. Usually if combat occurs, Rii will try to run from it. She is very worried about self preservation and won't likely get into a fight if she can help it.
      If she does get into a fight she will use her length and muscles to coil around opponents and try to squeeze the life out of them. Much like how an anaconda could kill a cow many times its size or a crocodile with its scaly hide Rii could kill dragons much larger than her simply by squeezing the breath out of them and breaking their bones. Her venom helps with this task as well. Her regular orange yellow flames are useful when being attacked and she will use this if she must. When she learns about her semi god powers she will still try to avoid fighting unless absolutely necessary, but she will use her powers if she has to fight.

   Background
   History:
Rye was born three years before Rii was hatched. She couldn't remember much of what occurred directly after she had hatched, but what she did know was that things were good, warm, and she never hungered for food.

Years passed by, and when she turned two Rii was still just a small little noodle of a dragon unable to fly. Being as long as she was it took the young female a very long time to learn how to move her body correctly. Despite the slow development of her body Rii grew very smart. She learned words and language at a rapid rate. The stories her parents taught Rii and Rye stuck fast in her memory even though oddly enough her memories grew hazy when thinking of her parents real names. Perhaps it was because they always called each other by pet names that Rii could not remember their real names. Even so, she lived, grew, and learned about the world around the nest all the same.

This was the time where Rii grew close to her elder brother Rye, and when she began venturing away from the nest. While she wasn't best friends with her older sibling, Rii found him very fun and loyal to be around despite being rather quiet. She learned about firewings and earthwings from their parents, but was not told about the other tribes. Rii began to feel proud of her family and their blood. However she grew ever curious about the outside world beyond the nest.

That year her parents laid another egg. Rii had gotten used to Rye bringing her shiny stones to look at or small mammals to eat. So when the egg appeared in the nest one day she hugged it amazed at its sparkling gleam and warmth. Her parents came close and warned Rii not to be rough with the stone, only they called it an "egg" instead of a stone. Rye appeared then as their mother told her how they would have another younger sibling when the egg opened up. Rii was amazed that a baby dragon could come from this stone egg thing. After that day she was forever soft and gentle with the egg hoping not to hurt what was inside. Sometimes Rii tried to curl over the egg like their mother sometimes did to warm it. Entirely captivated by the egg and the mysterious thing inside Rii's wanderlust had subsided and she stayed near the nest.

Eventually the day came when the egg hatched. Rii was awake for this event, and Rye was at the nest the time it occurred. Their mother was there as well, but their father was out hunting.

Rii watched amazed as the stone cracked and broke revealing a tiny dragon inside. They watched as the baby dragon clambered onto the nest and fell against her older sister. Rii stood stock still gazing at the littler dragon before looking up at their mother who nuzzled the baby. She raised her head then proudly exclaimed that she had another daughter. Rii remembered that day clearly. Her father arrived by the end of the time when Mairii was scrabbling around the nest, and Rye had watched in silence happy for his sisters and his parents.

Maybe because they were both female Rii took to sticking to Mairii like glue. As the year went on Rii could see that Mairii had a fondness for tumbling out of the nest and trying to leave it to see the outside world. She had far more wanderlust than Rii ever had, and it took much energy from Rii, Rye, and their parents to keep the baby in the nest where it was safe. Rii became thoroughly attached to her younger sister relaying stories that their parents had taught her to the little one.

When Rii was four and a half and Mairii was two and a half the pair bonded even further. Both girls liked to terrorize their brother and worry him by hiding outside of the nest. They went everywhere together and often played pranks on their father. When they were being good and learning about the world both girls would ask numerous questions. Though Mairii asked the most questions out of the two of them. Mairii expressed a great interest in learning about the world, nature, and everything around them. Rii had grown content with their home and helping to take care of Mairii to think about wandering much.

Then the worst happened. After Mairii's fourth birthday, and Rii's sixth, the storms began to gather in the north. Great amounts of rain fell in the mountains, so much that the ground became too waterlogged and could hold no more. The storms abated then, but only two days after another larger storm front passed over the mountains. With too much water already in the soil there was no place for all that liquid to go but down into the valley where their nest was.

Rii was sleeping soundly curled around Mairii when the rumble of approaching water and mud awoke Rye and their mother. Before anyone could wake the younger dragons and spirit them away to safety the water crashed through the area devouring the nest. The three siblings mother roared in fury as she lost sight of her children and the father got dragged under the water down stream a short way since he had been caught sleeping unaware of the danger. He awoke coughing and choking on water filled lungs before launching out of the water and into the air.

Rii and Mairrii were also caught in the strong current, but as they were so much smaller and lighter than their parents they could not fight the fast moving water. Rii was separated from Mairii, though she could hear and see the child half screaming and coughing under the water. Though her lungs also burned while being half filled with water Rii tried to swim to Mairii's aid. That was when a firm set of claws grabbed onto her and she felt herself being lifted out of the deep river. She surfaced gasping and coughing with Rye holding on to her, and immediately began to fight him. She screamed and puked up bubbles of muddy water trying to get Rye to go back down and get Mairii too. Struggling against his strong hold Rii could not dive back under to save her dear sister. She could almost feel Mairii's life ebbing away under the muddy waters the longer she stay at the surface. Then the bluish dragons energy left her. She fell limp in Rye's grip before darkness took her.

When she woke up on dry land with Rye hovering over her Rii had naught the energy to even lift up her head. Her lungs burned, but much of the water had escaped them as she coughed and spit up the murky liquid. Rye was curled protectively around her when Rii was finally able to croak out a question.

"Where is Mairii?" She stumbled over the words as more bubbles came up from her throat. Rii stared long and hard at her brother as he frowned and looked around them. Red hot anger pushed up into her body warming it up and prompting her to puke up the rest of the water from her lungs.

"You should have gotten her! I could have swam once you got me to the surface!" She half gurgled bubbles, half growled at Rye before falling limp upon the ground once again. Worry consumed her thoughts as she lay there resting alongside Rye. Soon their parents found them. Their mood was bittersweet as Rii lay her eyes upon them. She wasn't sure if it was her mother or father who towered over Rye and herself rumbling in relief that they were okay. What she did see was the limp form of Mairii who had been found and carried there to the shore. Rii struggled against her tired body and half crawled, half slithered to Mairii. It was clear that their parents had already grieved over their daughters death when they first found her, for they stood silent and still over the corpse.

"Wake up Mairii... We are safe now." She rumbled while lightly rolling the younger child's limp head with her snout. Rii yanked her head back and stared down at Mairii her eyes glittering with water.

"Momma why won't she wake up?" The sad cry fell from her lips as Rii pushed Mairii harder then looked up at her parents. The somber explanation of death that they gave Rii wrenched tears from her eyes and muffled cries from her jaws. She turned to Rye then, with hatred in her eyes and let a silent snarl coat her muzzle. She was silent then, denying the fact that Mairii couldn't hear or see anything anymore. She still believed that the baby dragon's ghost was there clinging to her broken body.

That night Rii, angered by her parents and her brother, stole away into the darkness. She dug up Mairii's corpse and carried it with her away from the grave.

I'll answer all your questions because they won't... I'll take you with me... So you can see.. She thought quietly while testing out her wings. Rii had been learning to fly slowly throughout the past year. She felt confident enough to use her skills now to get away.

She did just that. Honing her hunting skills along the way and learning to survive the harsh wilderness on her own. The corpse she brought with her decomposed throughout the years until all she had left was the skull of her dear sister Mairii. To this day Rii continues to show Mairii of the world as she sees it.
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 Rii had no idea where she had flown herself. The trees were taller and thicker than they were in the land to the east. Their trunks were roughly textured, perfect for climbing on, and they were wide enough a part for larger dragons to move through. This fact of course delighted the she dragon as the woman flew lazy circles through the sky. She had no idea that the trees were called sequoia's as her gem-like eyes measured the distances from the forest below her to the hills trying to figure out how large this territory was.

 She was also keeping an eye out for other dragons. With a pristine habitat such as this sitting just below her Rii was sure that somebody must own the place. Despite her hunger and the many prey items flitting through the forest, Rii would make sure she was alone before hunting. It was only natural of her to be worried since she herself was such a wuss. Rii rarely put herself in a position where she might be attacked. That only happened when she was truly desperate for food or water.

I haven't seen anyone for some time now...and those deer look good... Rii thought quietly while taking one last glance around the trees and sky above her. Then the slender dragon looked over the territory below spotting her intended prey. A deer herd was browsing through the undergrowth under the trees. There was a few large enough openings for her to drop down into, but Rii would have to be very careful with her wings. Most likely she would have to fold them up just prior to dropping into the canopy so as not to harm herself. The drop from there wouldn't hurt her so long as she came down head and chest first. Plus she could grip onto the trees themselves and pounce down to the earth.

Slowly the greenish blue dragon angled her flight aiming for the deer herd and one particular opening in the forest canopy. She stilled her mighty wings and glided the rest of the way down to make sure that the deer did not hear her approach. Rii knew that they would not be looking upwards for predators, but they would flee at the sound of wing strokes through the air.

Just how she had imagined it in her head, Rii glided to the canopy then dipped her head and closed up her wings. The drop was fast, and had she not been confident with her strength, balance, and agility Rii probably would have moderately injured herself. As it was, the dragon dropped through the opening rather silently. It was when she gripped at the trees while descending that she made noise. However the female had stretched out her long neck and nipped at the deer of her choosing while she had been falling towards the trunks of the trees. Her claws gripped at the bark as she pounced downwards onto the ground and watched her deer then proceed to run off.

A few minutes later and the dragon was tracking her prey through the forest. Her first catch was a big old buck. It lay there in the dirt and leaves that it had fallen in totally paralyzed from her venom. It was easy for her to snap up the deer and chew off its antler covered head. The rest of its body filled her belly while Rii looked over the bucks fine antlers. For a moment she debated on eating it, then decided that she would rather search for her second deer that she had bitten earlier. It wouldn't be long before her venom wore off and she wasn't totally full yet...  (fade)


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Post by Arkhor Tue Apr 14, 2015 1:37 am

Hey Welcome I'm Arkhor one of the mods here.

Well done with the bio, your great with the details. Everything is fine apart from one small issue, which you might have guessed is the venom. Since you have both venom and fire I guess Rii is part Earthwing and Firewing, which is fine but I think the venom should be weakened slightly. For example instead of paralyzing dragons it weakens there movement, due to the stronger defense of dragons. I see that you have a cool down too which is good, other than that I don't see any issues.

Like I said great bio I can't wait to rp with ya Razz

Just need to fix that up a bit then can approve you.
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Post by Rii Rii Tue Apr 14, 2015 11:52 am

I actually thought I still had WIP in my title. Maybe I stuck in in the other tagline instead? I'm not totally done with this. XD

I still need to add my picture and I was tweaking the abilities.

But thanks for messaging anyway, now I know how you guys think of that venom thing. I was a bit worried about that part.
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Post by Arkhor Tue Apr 14, 2015 11:56 am

Ah okay, the picture isn't needed. Of course its nice to have one but its not compulsory. Anyway feel free to post her again when your done.
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Post by Rii Rii Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:08 pm

I can't just keep this one up?
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hmm? I not saying you have to take it down XD

basicly I said reply when your finished then I can take a look at it and approve it hopefully Razz
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Post by Rii Rii Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:23 pm

Okay I believe I have clarified what I meant the paralyses should do to a dragon now. Is that okay? Or would it be better for their speed to be cut in half instead?
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Post by Hyruu Sun Jan 10, 2016 8:23 am

Has this been moved out or has it just not been moved to the approved section ?
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Post by Rii Rii Mon Jan 11, 2016 9:26 am

It was moved out so I could update it. I finished up mostly but just have to stick her picture on it. You could put it back in accepted if you want though. I don't know when I'll finish up the final bit on her picture.
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Post by Ventus Coelus Sun Jan 31, 2016 11:22 pm

Yo why is this still in here I thought it was back in accepted EW's already XD

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Post by Rii Rii Thu Feb 25, 2016 11:32 pm

So this is ready to be tweaked and judged again. I'm not going to bother posting these new abilities in the staff approval area cause nobody answered me last time till I bugged the lot of you in the chat box months later.

So is she too over powered? Needs to be more descriptive? please give me a whole outline of what's good or bad about it and not just a "Yeah that's not good" answer. Please... XD
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Empathy-Ability to read or sense the emotions or feelings of others. Yes she could even sense the emotions of higher gods too.

Personally I think this is fine, as long as it isn't mind-reading, but others may have concerns over what she can do to full gods.

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Fire and heat manipulation- Rii has the ability to control the kinetic energy of atoms to generate, control, and absorb fire. This means that she no longer can be injured by any fire elemental attack, unless it is an attack from a full god of fire attacking her with their strongest fire attacks. In which case her fire attacks probably wouldn't do much of anything to them either. Her normal fire breath attack is increased in power from its previous yellow orange flames to blue due to her semi god powers awakening. Rii no longer has to waste her venom on making the blue fire. In retrospect, when she does add her venom to her blue flames it turns the flames white to the hottest that they can be. The white flames only last as long as her venom runs out, and settles at a warm 4986.85 °C which is hotter than lava at 1300 °C. She can also cover herself in flames like a living dragon torch. I would suggest not touching her when she is covered in blue flames for your hand and arm might melt off and catch fire..... Of course with enough water you could put out her flames, but both the blue and white colored flames would take a while to put out or a lot of water all at once hitting her. Though a demi, semi, or full god of water could put out her flames much sooner than a regular water using dragon.
(This also means that she can dive into a volcano and it's lava and be totally fine)

In my opinion, even if you are a Semi god, you still need more limitations that doesn't require something specific from her potential enemies (i.e. to be a SeaWing). Limiting her white flames to her venom is fine, but you might need to state how long she can maintain her venom, and therefore the white flames, for (later you said 5 seconds, but you might want to add it here as well). As for coating herself in flames and being able to dive into lava, since she's part EarthWing as well, you will need to add limitations on this as well. Is there a time limit that she can be in flames before it will start to burn her?

I also have some concern about her ability to manipulate kinetic energy of atoms. Wouldn't that mean she can turn anything solid into molten lava? Or even superheat oxygen in the air that they basically become bombs if there's a live fire source somewhere? If so, how does she do this? If it's through her mind, then that's OP. Either case, you probably will have to remove this as it can be manipulated to become too strong to handle.

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Earth and stone manipulation- Rii will now be able to control earth; sand, stone, metal, rock, lava, dirt, and other minerals. However she can only control the earth in about a half mile radius around herself. Anything farther than that and she can't control it. Though she could certainly throw these objects farther than half a mile. Rii can throw earth related things with her power about a mile and a half away. She can also use this power to cover herself in stone, lava, or whatever earth related thing as if it were armor. If a full god of earth were to fight against Rii her powers wouldn't do anything to them either. Depending on their abilities her powers might be null and void unable to work at all if the full god of earth was using the earth around her. Ice using dragons and fire weilding dragons would be the most effective in thwarting Rii's earthen attacks.

Earth manipulation and all the materials are fine, but she needs to have limits to balance them all out. Being able to cover herself in stone or lava as armour is already rather overpowered, in a sense that only full gods can beat her. Again, this needs limits. E.g. If she uses stone armour, wouldn't that mean she can't flex or move? Lava armour doesn't really make sense if the whole thing would just plop onto the ground all over her, as it is very dense and it isn't exactly solid.

You will also need to be clear on how ice or fire can defeat her 'earth' attacks.

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Fire/Blue fire- Then there is that regular dragon ability where she can breath fire. Her flames are a hot blue, however if she chooses to waste her venom Rii can apply it like a spray to her flame. Her venom flame will not poison or paralyze because the venom is burnt off by the flames, but it does increase the strength of the flame. While using venom her hot blue flames turn to scorching white flames. However she can only use this white flame for a matter of 5 seconds before her venom is depleted. Her venom regenerates fastest after she eats, but normally it refills after use in about a days time. She has about ten uses of her venom while biting or coating her tail spikes before it must be refilled.

I'm not really seeing how the tail spikes can apply to be a spray of white flames compared to venom straight from her venom sac. It also seems pretty specific that she has a total of 11 uses before having to spend a day to recover. I suppose this is fine, but I'm worried that the flames are a 1 hit KO if anyone is unfortunate enough to get into range (which would be quite unbalanced as this is a type of a one-hit wonder ability).

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   Weaknesses: Water is a huge weakness to her now. With enough of it her flames can be put out and her earth abilities eroded away. Though it would take more time for the water to effect her earth powers compared to her fire ones. Lightning is a somewhat bothersome one. Should another dragon be able to wield this power she could be felled rather quickly should she not have herself shielded before hand. In her normal form Rii does not have a lot of defenses. Her scales are not very useful against powerful dragons, though they keep arrows at bay. Strong two-handed steel swords, pikes, and lances can get through her hide as well as dragon claws. Another big weakness would be her loneliness. By seeking companionship from others she may put herself in situations where danger is very close. If per chance she is not keeping her body movements in check, she might knot herself around something unintentionally. However this is very rare and only happens if she is not calm and when she is overwhelmed with many things at once.

It still seems like Rii is only weak to full gods, with anything lesser won't be able to pass through her armour or her attacks. At this point, even though she is weak to water, it seems it will still take a lot of that to just put out any defences she is having on. This just goes back to my point that you need to limit your new abilities so that Rii couldn't just spam putting some armour on and turn everything into molten rocks. Altogether, it will easily cover up all her weaknesses.
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Post by Rii Rii Fri Feb 26, 2016 5:10 pm

Yay I got a good answer back. Okay I shall tweak a bunch now. I was wondering how powered a semi could be compared to a full so now I shall fix. <3
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Post by Rii Rii Sat Mar 12, 2016 3:13 pm

Okay so I nerfed the fire abilities spare for what she already had accepted earlier for you Sly. I made the empathy ability more descriptive, which should settle anyone's fears on it.

While I didn't nerf her earth and stone manipulation I did put limits on it and added more weaknesses. Regular dragons not just demi, semi, or full gods can deal with this now.

The fire blue fire was an ability she had that was already accepted and I am not changing it at all. Also, the venom doesn't do anything on her tail spikes at all unless she stabs someone with them or even pricks them a little. Then the venom goes to work. She regularly pretends to preen and clean her fur applying the venom from her fangs over her tail spikes to increase the chances of her getting away if attacked.

As I said before I added more weaknesses that also includes regular dragons able to get to her. Also, if I don't mention a tribe at all, please assume that the tribe I didn't mention like nightwings, lightwings, skywings ect... would be able to attack her and deal regular damage. I just didn't mention them because I didn't think I needed to.
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Post by Rii Rii Sun Aug 21, 2016 1:56 am

Just edited her age +15 onto the previous 23. Then I upped her eight and length. Finished up with adding more relations.

Should be noted that in 15 years she still does not know she's the EW semi god. She has learned about her empathy power and is learning how to control her fungi powers.

This is done with edits though. <3
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