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Post by Zed Thu Sep 04, 2014 1:34 pm

Myself while using black mana. 'Sorin':
Myself while using white mana. 'Avacyn':
Personal Info
Name: Hello, my name is Sorin Markov,
Title: Lord of Innistrad.
Age: I do not know my exact age, however I lived for several millenia, having seen more than any mortal should experience.
Gender: Male.
Personality: I have a very interesting personality, although many have called me simply boring. Well first off, I'm not boring, I'm just lazy. I do not much, but what I do, I'll do it to the end and usually it doesn't end for me. I am a calculating nature, seeing most things from a cold, logic point of view making me look "emotionless", which I admit, I am almost. Still, there is not only me...since I came back from a little trip from Pyrria to the rest of the Multiverse and back, I recieved another entity I am host of...or better, I am host of his body, I'll explain this in my history section. Still he, his name is Nicol Bolas, was with me at the time my body got...seperated from my essence to say the least. And he volunteered to pick me up so that I may live inside his body for pretty much all eternity, or until I find a new body that can hold my entire being. Nicol is a bit more brutal than I am. If we fight, he is most of the time the one doing the fighting while I sit back and do the rest of our life. He doesn't care about moral standards and is mostly only out for killing.
Interests: There are not many things that I actually enjoy besides my huge lifespan. What I still enjoy is reading. There are books I have here in Pyyria which are taking long enough for me to read that I do not get bored. Another thing is drinking blood. Do not misunderstand that, I drink blood out of bottles while pouring it in a special glass I made myself. If you were thinking about hunting others and tearing them apart, it's Nicol's territory.
Dislikes: What he likes is what I dislike. I can't stand pointless fighting and shedding blood. It makes me sick to see innocent die just for the sake of entertainment. Also, I do not hunt anything for blood. If he wants to do that, I will let him while I fall asleep.
Fears: To be honest, the one fear that I have is that I will never find a body I can call my own. Because the longer I spend time with him in one body, the more our magic tries to make us one to expand the mana pool inside the 'corpus aetheris'.

General Appearance
Height: Nicol is a naturally tall dragon, getting at the height of 72 ft.
Scales: His scales are dark red, getting at the color of blood or good red wine.
Eyes: His eyes are of a dark yellow color, shining golden.
Appearance: Nicol is a tall draconian dragon, being naturally tall. His leathery wings are at least as tall as he is and the width of his wings is at least twice his size. His head is adorned by two curved horns which move together while a little gem is held between them, called the Gem of Creation. All together, he is a tall but rather skinny dragon, appearantly not fit for close combat for which he can make up with his magical abilities.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: We both belong to the Nightwing Tribe
Family: My real family is located in Innistrad while Nicol has no real family. However, I found an own family here on Pyyria in Frostflare, the Icewing Queen.
Mate: Frostflare, my deepest love.
Hatchlings: Not yet.

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: To understand my strength, you have to know how the magic in the Multiverse works. We Planeswalker divide between five colors of magic: Red, fire and destruction. Blue, illusion and psychic powers. Green, nature and brute strength. White, restoration and unity. Black, pestillence and death. I myself control black magic, but not in the aspect of pestillence rather than death. I am a master of sangromancy, the ability to manipulate "blood". But sangromancy only utilizes the objective aspect of blood to control the true power inside, the lifeforce of others.
With the black magic, I am able to drain other's lifeforce to heal myself, place curses upon others to weaken them even further or even temporarily affect the enemy's mind to manipulate their actions. With that set of abilities, I am more of a magical fighter rather than a melee brawler.
But since my little "retirement", I returned temporarily to Innistrad, I found myself wielding another color of magic, namely the white magic. I am able to use it to heal and strengthen my allies. I even can cleanse an area of all evil with the holy light of justice. However, I can't use both colors, unlike Nicol who even wields three colors at once, I am forced to switch between each of them to cast whatever spell I am in need of.

Special Abilities:
Black Mana:
Sanguine Bond I pay my magic with my own lifeforce. The stronger a spell in damage and effect, the more life I have to pay. However, the weaker I am, the more my own healing capabilities are increased. All of my self-healing and lifedraining abilities are increased in strength and effectiveness the less lifeforce I possess.
Transfusion: I take a bit of my opponent's lifeforce to heal myself. This spell does not cost any life.
Sanguine Pool: I use my blood to turn myself into a magical pool of blood, making myself untargetable for any kind of attack. However, to keep myself in this state, I have to constantly pay of my lifeforce.
Tides of Blood: I can turn any leaking blood into sharp, solid projectiles shooting out to nearby enemies. Everytime I use it, I have to pay more to solidify the blood. However, this buffs my healing even further.
Crimson Torrent: I can unleash  all blood I have stored upon those years to drown all who in a flood of blood, enchanted with black magic. This blood is very potent, damaging all hit by the wave over a long duration while increasing all damage that I deal to them even further. However, this leaves me at around 5% of my own lifeforce, forcing me into a state that leaves me vulnerable to everything that comes at me.
                                                                       
White Mana:
Intangible Virtue: While in Angel Form, Avacyn radiates an aura of pure magic, reinforcing everyone of allies around him. As a bonus, he becomes stronger the more allies he supports.
Tatsumasa: Avacyn can call his trusted sword by his side, Tatsumasa, The Dragon's Fang. With it, he is able to fight in close combat as a skilled swordsman, giving him more duelling potential than his dark counterpart. He can force his sword away in order to summon the spirit of the Great Dragon Tatsumasa, who will aid him in fighting his opponents. While Tatsu is in Spirit Form. Avacyn is unable to use him as a sword.
Pillar of Light:  Avacyn can cast a pillar of pure sunlight, even in the darkest of nights, to suppress an opponent (or more, depends on their size compared to the pillar). The more allies he supports, the wider the pillar will become when cast.
Calcify:  Avacyn forces light to charge between his wings. IF fully charged, he can release a beam of concentrated light that purifies the lands, temporarily turning those who fight him and his allies to stone. While turned to stone, they can't be destroyed. However, they can still be injured and feel the pain after they are returned to normal.
Savior of the Mortals:   Avacyn can turn himself into a giant, armored spirit version of himself, radiating a purifying light that heals all allies for most of their injuries. As long as he is in that Avatar Form, Intangible Virtue is doubled and he himself always wields Tatsumasa. Also, while being in Avatar Form, he is indestructible. However, he becomes slower in his movement.

Weaknesses: My greatest weakness is my changing of mana. While using black, I am a mage, suited for ranged combat, slowly draining by opponent of his life while restoring myself. However, I am not a great brawler, not fighting in close combat where I can be hurt with teeth and nails. While utilizing white mana, I am a melee fighter, great at bringing supportive aspects to wars while defending myself in close combat. But the porblem here is the other way around, I will be weak in ranged fights. If someone manages to stay away from me while constantly hurting me with abilities, I will be forced to retreat and change which will give my opponent time to react to these changes.
Combat Style: Mentioned above.

History will be added at a later date for I am neither in the mood nor in condition to tell you anything about my life at the moment.
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Post by Frostflare Thu Sep 04, 2014 1:43 pm

So why did you make another chracter sheet?
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Post by Celestia Tue Sep 09, 2014 11:59 am

Nope. Lets start with the undead aspect. Not being able to die is just a no. I know your body can be destroyed but then you could just move to some other dead body and occupy that. Thats just no. You also described to me in the chat that " is not affected by magic in any way, except for holy revival and necromancy," Also a no. We also have enough controversy over StarWings going to space. Going to whole other dimensions, nope. As for the magic blood being untargetable by any attack is also a no. I could understand blunt force attacks but things like fire and stuff should kill you. Not to mention if your blood is scattered you shouldn't be able to reform.

Keep in mind its up to the dragons owner weather or not you influence their mind any. Anything otherwise would be godmodding. Being able to take someone else's life force needs to have a cost to you. You also need a draw back for turning peeps to stone. Your avatar form being indestructible is also a no.

You also have way too many powers. I mean even if you were a god thats a lot of freaking powers. Please significantly downsize the amount of abilities you have.



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Post by Corrode Tue Sep 09, 2014 12:40 pm

Also, it would help if you added a disclaimer. This is a character from Magic: The Gathering after all.
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